Interesting update.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed
[Report This]Date: 06/08/10 05:48 am
Thanks for a great update.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: 31/07/10 11:39 pm
I like this. :) I don't know very much about the Chili Peppers, beyond their music, but I think you're doing a pretty good job of showing their personalities. I eagerly await the next update.
Reviewer: copper oxidase Signed [Report This]Date: 30/07/10 08:28 am
Very interesting . Different. What's next?
Reviewer: cimmy1 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/05/10 02:25 pm
I have to say I'm really enjoying this story . Update soon .
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: 06/05/10 05:35 pm
Interesting update. Anthony seems to have a lil something something for June. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 06/05/10 01:14 am
Damn! That Anthony is such sexy badass - RUN June, run like the wind, but the same time he can be so charming, so what can I say - I'd Hit It!!! LOL Update soon please!!
Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/05/10 12:11 pm
There were some grammar issues in this chapter. I like that you did some research, so you know how they would answer some of the questions.
I think you should get to know you characters. Of course you don't know Anthony, but this is a version of him, don't try to be exact. Take what you know about him, and merge that, with what you feel this character would do, or how he would feel. I also believe that you should tape a little more into June. Who is she?
JMO
Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]Date: 05/05/10 09:35 am
Yay! Me likey this fic very much! And I love that you chose that damn sexy Anthony Kiedis and Chili peppers' music - I'm a huge fan! Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]Date: 04/05/10 12:52 pm
I'm liking this story so far. June needs to step back a bit, and chant "keep your legs closed, keep your legs closed". lol She may want to invest in some pants.
Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]Date: 03/05/10 04:28 am
he does work fast, but she isn't stopping him either. Lovd it!
Author's Response:
Thanx You so very much!!! ^^ I'm glad you're enjoying it.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: 03/05/10 02:24 am
What a greeting for her. Of course she isn't going to quit her job , not after getting a kiss like that.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: 03/05/10 02:17 am
Loved the update but Mr Kiedis is a jerk/moron. June also makes me wonder why she's allowing him so much freedom with her body. He obviously doesn't respect boundaries and it borders on sexual harassment. Makes me think of date rape how he's approaching her. She needs to set some boundaries and if he's looking for an easy lay he needs to look elsewhwere. Hope she gets an interview before she allows him in her pants as it looks like that's where they're headed. Hmmm, is she that desperate for an interview to allow it to go this far??? Where is the professionalism???
Author's Response:
Wow, sexual harassment.!! Well, when it comes to the boundaries part I do understand where you're coming from but...Anthony Kiedis has actually admitted to doing things such as this in his younger days....talking to a hot interviewer and then banging her afterward...I know it sounds crazy but its the truth. I swear! He's a daddy now though. No more singing then banging for him...buahaha.
I'll look into June making her boundaries known, but in this scene i think she's just a bit flustered from recognizing the song from her dream then acting on the urges in real life... She really wants the interview and to keep her composure and maybe a nice piece of Kiedis to seal the deal...maybe she'll even get to keep him. ^^
Thanks for reviewing
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 03/05/10 02:09 am
I like it. June is already smitten with him.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: 03/05/10 02:00 am
That was sexy and hot, and I loved it. Anthony is hot mess!!!
Author's Response:
Isn't he?! I just love to hear him talk when he actually does interviews. His voice just does things to my brain...*drool*
Anywhoozle, thanx for the review!
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 03/05/10 12:52 am
Loved it. Wow, Anthony's sure testing her with that kiss. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 02/05/10 12:38 am
It was good. So far I like the lead, and the side characters. Although, I don't really see the Peppers, when I read it. June needs to concentrate a little more on the music, and not what's in his tub sock. lol
Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]Date: 01/05/10 07:24 am
That's some view she had of the band in nothing but tube socks. Love the update. Keep them coming please......
Reviewer: Chell Anonymous [Report This]Date: 01/05/10 04:52 am
Yep, I like the peppers and yep, I've seen the tube sock and yep, wow... June is in for it.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: 01/05/10 03:59 am
That was interesting, I have never really been a fan the the Red HOt Chilli Peppers but I read the story anyway. I was plesantly surprised. Of course I had to admire Anthony's chest, his pecs are quite nice!! Please update soon.
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 30/04/10 10:25 pm
keep it coming
Reviewer: jadadominique Anonymous [Report This]Date: 30/04/10 07:09 pm
can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: meka Anonymous [Report This]Date: 28/04/10 05:20 pm
Nice starts. I usually don't read fics that star real people. But I decided to to stop by, and check out the first chapter.
Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]Date: 28/04/10 11:43 am
It caught my attention, can't wait for her to meet the band. Please update soon.
Reviewer: Chell Anonymous [Report This]Date: 28/04/10 07:11 am
Me likey. Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 28/04/10 05:26 am