I love this story, but when will you update. It's been 7 months, I'm freakin out here.
Reviewer: EthiopianAngel Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 27/12/10 03:15 am
Great update and yes he does have PTSD. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: 25/05/10 01:35 am
PTSD is awful. I feel his pain. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: 25/05/10 01:28 am
She is lucky that she was able to live with her father after the tragic death of her mother. So why wasn't her dad paying child support or helping her mother with the responsibility of raising their child together. Her stepmother and sister sound like they are mean spirited people. Surprised that her dad isn't aware of the way that they treat his daughter. So the dude with the tattoo on his neck will be the leading male? Did she complete the course work for her Pharmacy degree? Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: 25/05/10 01:22 am
How sad that her mother was killed by robbers. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: 25/05/10 01:07 am
Glad Kheng reached out for help. Hopefully Dr Smith can help him.Those dreams he's having are terrible. Great update!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 25/05/10 12:59 am
Thank you for the quick read. I like the story line so far. Cant wait to see where you take it.
Reviewer: ANj1874 Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 15/05/10 05:09 am
I think this is going to be interesting. The family dynamic is going to be the most telling about her I think. Looking forward to more.
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: 12/05/10 12:15 am
Kheng sounds sexy, I want to help him with his problem. Bring on the update, sister!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/05/10 07:01 am
I feel his pain. I go through some serious bouts of insomnia myself. Never thought about trying Nyquil though.
Reviewer: Junebug66 Signed [Report This]Date: 11/05/10 06:05 am
Luv this story already update please
Reviewer: Jasmine Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/05/10 05:41 am
Loved the update. He should seek help. Dad is in the medical profession he could help him find someone to treat him.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/05/10 03:39 am
Loved the update!! Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 11/05/10 02:34 am
I cannot wait to find out more about what is giving him nightmares from overseas..I can just imagine.
His mom is a hoot and siblings will be siblings!!
Nice updt sweetie...
Reviewer: neneburge Signed [Report This]Date: 11/05/10 02:12 am
Mahogany's beginnings was so tragic. For someone who has suffered so much in her young life, she's remarkably upbeat. At least she found her Dad. Her stepmother and sister sound just wonderful.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: 09/05/10 12:54 pm
Loved the update and glad she has a relationship with her father. Why was she unhappy about his comments???
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 09/05/10 06:01 am
Good , they found her dad, but she also has the evil step mom and sis unfortunately. Wonderful update.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: 09/05/10 12:25 am
This isn't boring at all, you're just developing a plot. I'm actually quite interested to know what happened at the end. I love the drama of the back story here, and it seems it will only get more intense. And I definitely want to know about the soldier's story as well.
And I hope she beats the brick off her step mother and half sister. I know they were shsocked too, but I get the feeling this some Queen type thing, where she represents the real love of her father's life. Resentment abound.
Keep it up, this is a good start. I want to read more.
Reviewer: BoSoxQT Signed [Report This]Date: 08/05/10 11:57 pm
Well is it is getting quite interesting..so her dad is white....that show make for some interesting interactions between her and his family and friends. Wonder how they took to the dark chocolate love child..we know his wife and daughter were less than thrilled. At least her dad took her ina nd treated her well even though he never knew about her..that had to be strange.
I wonder why her smile dropped?? Did she not get her degree? She is definitely hiding something!!
I cannot wait for more sweetie..good job and not boring..just story development..so it will all make sense later...that is very important!!
Reviewer: neneburge Signed [Report This]Date: 08/05/10 09:10 pm
It is so obvious that her father loves her, so why doesn't she tell him the way that is wife and her daughter treat her? Now that she is grown I hope that she slaps the shit out of that heifer and her duaghter. Loving this story!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 08/05/10 05:14 pm
Keep going, I'm interested in seeing where you take me.
Reviewer: Junebug66 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 07/05/10 06:39 pm
What a way to start a story, with death and sadness. I sure that love and happiness comes that Mahogany's way.
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 07/05/10 06:20 am
Wow, what a sad start! Why was her mom killed??? Can't wait to see what happens next.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 07/05/10 05:13 am
Ok must you break my heart with the first chapter ..Lawd have mercy. That poor woman...she was trying to protect her family and they killed her..I could cry. Thank goodness she locked that door or no telling what would have happened to that baby.
I want to know more and find out what happens to that beautiful baby...lord I hope it gets better ..so sad.
You are off to a great start sweetie...very good job!!
Reviewer: neneburge Signed [Report This]Date: 07/05/10 03:35 am
Poor baby losing her mom at such an early age. Obviously the area they lived in was dangerous, too bad she didn't try and get the gun first or get to the phone and dial 911, unless she didn't have one. Thanks for sharing your story, I enjoyed the first chapter.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: 07/05/10 03:23 am