KC almost broke his neck trying to get out of that car. lol
Author's Response: When you see a good thing you gotta strike while the iron is hot before someone else gets it. lol Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/05/10 09:52 pm
This chapter was really good. Your characterization and plot development seem to be going to pretty good.
Author's Response: Thank you, I appreciate your the time it takes the readers to not just read but also review.
Date: 18/05/10 05:05 am
Dam!! way too short.
I just love this story.
With K.C. and Gabrielle living so close, nuff said.
please update soon.
Author's Response: I was getting the same thing from my sister who edits for me and I've been working on that. Will try to shoot for every couple of days, and yes a couple does mean two. Reviewer: Janetbd Signed [Report This]
Date: 14/05/10 05:06 pm
All right someone is making the move. Good for them. Nice to see K.C. going after what he wants
Author's Response:
I like to think his judgement is getting better and he's not going to let a quality woman get away. Hopefully she sees the same thing in him.
Reviewer: cimmy1 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 14/05/10 01:45 pm
Oh, snap!!! K.C. is making sure that Gabby knows that he is interested. He is going to take that bull by the horns and that is just fine by me. Keep those update coming, I love this story!!!
Author's Response: Gotta be careful, if you're gonna ride a bull you gotta hold on tight!!!
Date: 14/05/10 06:19 am
KC is about to make his move on his neighbor. Jarrod wants Camille, he is going to have his work cut out for him because of his profession. No long distance affair for her. Loved the updates!
Author's Response: Thank you for your support. I was tweaking the next chapters and haven't had a chance to respond to the last set of reviews.
Date: 14/05/10 06:07 am
Interesting update. Hope these guys aren't players. Those ladies better watch out.
Author's Response: You know sometimes it takes a good woman to settle a bad man. I think that has already been proven with his father. The women need to crack that whip and whip it good!
Date: 14/05/10 02:19 am