I love the relationship between Reille and her parents. I appreciate her mother not wanting to worry the kids with her illness, and encouraging Reille to continue her education after the truth was revealed. You have a knack adding information, without distracting from the story.
Author's Response: Breast cancer is a subject that is literally near if not dear to my heart. In my case we did tell my daughter and I was the one that was away and she stayed home for college which she would have done anyway. So I can actuallly speak on this one. It will either strengthen you or break you. Reviewer: Cholyn Signed
[Report This]Date: 21/05/10 11:10 pm
I am really enjoying this story. I must say that it take more than met someone and jumping right into bed to form a relationship. And like the slow build up. Looking for some good things. Thank You for the way that you are laying it down. For a first attempt at writing I give you 4Gold Stars Sweet.
Author's Response: I tend to believe that when you have friendship as well as sexual attraction the relationship seems a little more believeable. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
[Report This]Date: 18/05/10 08:29 am
That was really interesting. I like it.
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it keep reading.
[Report This]Date: 18/05/10 05:33 am
Great update. Hope KC behaves himself at her home as it seems a lil devil keeps popping up on his shoulder. Can't wait to see how this plays out.
Author's Response: A lil devil in him, a lil devil in her should lead to a lil fun.
[Report This]Date: 18/05/10 01:54 am
K.C has got it bad!!! I really like how you are building slowly to the hot, butt, naked sex!!! Looking forwarsd the next chapter.
Author's Response: Keep reading, the freaks will come out at night.
Date: 17/05/10 05:36 pm
Really enjoyed both chapters. Like the slow build up between K.C and Gaberielle. Look forward to reading more.
Author's Response: I keep thinking speed it up but the characters seem to be asking for a slow build. Thank you for hanging tough with me. I appreciate it.
[Report This]Date: 17/05/10 03:51 pm
I'm okay with the size of the chapters, because you update often. Mr-Fix-It man is getting ready to work and not only on fixing her bulb. Thanks for the update.
Author's Response: My computer did something scary while I was trying to respond to you but it seems to be okay now. For that miracle I think I will post again in homage to the Computer gods. Thanks for reading. Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 17/05/10 03:00 pm
Loving the story. THank you for making it longer. We appreciate it. :) Thank you for the response that you having giving to the other reviewer. It makes it seem like to are interested in what we think. Like all of the detail of the day to day living. Now waiting for all the details of the loving.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading it was really hard to write longer chapters I actually had a have a hard time cutting down. I am interested in what my readers think and a little loving is on its way!
[Report This]Date: 17/05/10 02:00 pm