I hate the photos. They are really cheesy and disruptive. I have to navigate my eyes around them just to read the story. This is supposed to be a story, right?
Not a slide or picture show.
Sorry for the harshness, but I've been quiet for how many chapters now?
More words, less pics.
Author's Response:
Hello Willieriley, in a sea of over 90k words those pictures symbolise for me inspiration which I chose to share with the readers. But I think I will change my bio to reflect my new self-proclaimed title, Junebug66, Queen of Cheese so that others may be warned that We (Note the use of the Royal We) are going to be hard for the lactose intolerant to digest.
Thanks for the review
Reviewer: willieriley Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/05/12 12:44 am
Hey, that was very nice. Finally they all get to meet. That grandma has a mouth on her, but you got to love her. NICE PICTURE! They really add life to the story. THANK YOU. So now everyone know that they want to commit to each other, when will he pop the ?????
NOW UPDATE!!!!!
Author's Response:
Hey Cimmy1, glad you liked it. Grandma Rae and Grandpa David do it all with love. I like to think that the pics add more life and definitely color to the story, so I'm happy you like them. The question will be asked when the time is right and that's all I'm gonna say.
Thanks for reading, enjoying and reviewing. I do appreciate it.
Reviewer: cimmy1 Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 02/02/11 11:54 pm