Hey girl!
I'm praying about your medical situation; Know that God does not give us any more than we can handle.
LOVE THE CHAPTER!
Chel
Author's Response:
Hey Chel,
I appreciate you reading and reviewing as usual and I definitely appreciate the prayers.
Thanks Chel.
Reviewer: miquerida Signed [Report This]Date: 17/06/10 07:02 pm
LUV IT!!
The pics are SO BEAUTIFUL!!
Just gets better and better. Can I HAVE K.C. lol
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Chel
Author's Response:
Hi Chel
I am glad you are still enjoying the story. Stay tuned.
Reviewer: miquerida Anonymous [Report This]Date: 12/06/10 10:59 pm
What a man, he is so sweet. Thanks for the update!!
Author's Response:
I know isn't a sweetie. But he is the man and he's got something, something going on. Wait and see bayoumomma.
Thank you for reading and reviewing I really appreciate you staying with me.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: 12/06/10 10:33 pm
This story is so good. It just keeps getting better and better. The pic are fabulous. I like how everything goes with the story. Great visuals. Can wait to find out what happens next. This truely is a very romantic and sweet gift for him to have come up with. YOU GO K.C. Thank You for the consistent updates:).
Author's Response: Thank you cimmy1. I'm glad you are liking the pics it takes a minute (not) to find the right ones. I am glad you are liking them together and K.C. is going to be the man that keeps giving wait and see.
Date: 12/06/10 12:53 pm
he is very romantic! I can't wait until after the b-day party, it's on!
Author's Response: Hey bayoumomma, you don't know the half of it but let's get through this weekend first. Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/06/10 12:44 am
K.C. is just the perfect man. So attentive and loving. Who doesn't want a man like that. Love the story so far.
Author's Response: Thank you for your kind review and he hope you continue to enjoy both K.C. and the story.
Date: 10/06/10 04:06 pm
You can't leave us hanging like this?
Please update soon.
I want to know what he has up his sleve.
Author's Response: Sorry, didn't mean to leave you hanging Janetbd. What else he has up his sleeve you say, besides his hand. Reviewer: Janetbd Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/06/10 01:44 pm
Girl, Ch.24 is OFF THE HOOK! LUV IT LUV IT LUV IT.
I'm glad he explained himself to her. They needed that talk.
Can't wait for the next chapter!!
Author's Response: Hey chel thank you. They did need that talk but that is not the only one they need to have. You'll see what I mean soon. Keep reading, I appreciate it your support. Reviewer: miquerida Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/06/10 03:44 pm
?? Mmm Does she know everything. What else could be coming. Crazy B**** ex maybe? Updates please:0) Love it. Nice picture.
Author's Response:
I'm not telling. You shall just have to wait and see. Glad you like the pictures. Keep reading thank you very much.
Reviewer: cimmy1 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 08/06/10 01:46 pm
I sure hope he has explained all that he needs to about himself. There is always that one thing that you think is of no im portance, but to someone else it may be life changing. Wonderful update!
Author's Response: Ain't that the truth, well all we can do is wait and see if there are anymore revelations to come. (Very Evil Laughter Ensues From Somewhere In the Room). Did you hear something? Thank you very much bayoumomma. Keep reading. Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/06/10 12:13 pm
No, he shouldn't have said anything to her sooner. I'm sorry, but Gabrielle is overreacting. Her brother told her the truth, and she needs listen.
Gf got the side eye from me, when she hung up on him. She needs to check herself. I get that she's upset, and I understand that she's in shock, but get a grip.
Author's Response:
You know we women can be contrary when we meet someone we really like. Gabrielle didn't hang up on him she said good night very politely before disconnecting the call. Thanks for reading girl as usual you are the voice of reason. As you can se I've seriously put to use your lesson of placing images and I thank you for that as well. Appreciate it Cholyn.
Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/06/10 07:18 am
Great Update!
Those two sure were going at it hot and heavy. They definitely have chemistry; but it is too soon. Brother Chris is like an early morning dip in the chilly sea water.
I agree with his less than subtle interruption and use of the Internet to check the dude out. A lot of people show up in the islands with money, reinvented pasts and backgrounds, and less than honest or honorable intentions.
K.C. seems to taking it in stride. The next day should be interesting.
Until then...
Author's Response: Girl you are too right. Men are dogs when it comes to the goodies and will do anything to get what they want. But K.C. is not that kind of dog, I hope. Thanks again Blue. Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/06/10 05:49 am
Gurl the pic are hot. I would love to be those sheets, draped all around that body. I can understand why he didn't say anything. He has women throwing themselves at him all the time because of his money. Cautious is best, hopefully she will understand that. Give a little get a Lot growwl :0).
Author's Response: I know he is so hot. Love his blue eyes. As I said to miquerida, I am trying to stay true to the characters so where they lead me I'm going to follow. Thanks for caring and sharing.
Date: 06/06/10 11:29 pm
LUV IT LUV IT LUV IT!!
I hope Gabrielle doesn't let him off the hook so fast. . .make it slow then put him out of his misary!
Author's Response: I'm gonna try to stay true to the characters chel that's all I'm gonna say. Thank you for reading girl I know you've got your hands full with the baby. Reviewer: miquerida Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/06/10 02:33 am
I don't think he should have said anything sooner. This is a two day old relationship, he still had time to tell her and ease her into his lifestyle, but big brother stepped into the picture. How many people meet someone and tell them their entire life story in 48 hours, especially when they have that kind of money. I hope let's him off the hook.
Author's Response: It seems like this relationship is at least a month old bayou but I feel ya. Whatever will they say to one another when they meet again? Thank you for your continued support.
Date: 06/06/10 01:14 am
Very Nice . Good so far.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading glad you liked it.
Date: 05/06/10 04:17 pm
I just love this story, can't get enough of it.
I hope that you'll be expanding on Cam and Jarrod's relationship.
Author's Response: Thank you Janetbd, I'm glad you're enjoying the story. CamJar will get what's coming to them. Wait and see. Reviewer: Janetbd Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/06/10 06:20 pm
Thanks for the update. It good that Chris is being a protective brother, but I'm glad Gabrielle put him in his place. You also made me laugh out loud when Chris asked if they were going to have sex in front of him.
Author's Response: He's the big brother every girl wishes she had. Thank you for reading and hope you're enjoying St. Sebastian.
Date: 04/06/10 04:50 pm
I like Chris, he's a good addition to the story. I sorta hope he does fall in line with trusting K.C, even after he discovers the truth about him.
Author's Response: Now know he can't let him get away that easy right. Big Bro will be watching. Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/06/10 10:00 am
Aww Happy Belated Birthday!
I would love more insight into Camile and Jarrod, there's an interesting story there.
I hope Reille and K.C. cont. to take this relationship slow. Although a little heat would be nice, just as long as neither gets burnt.
Author's Response:
Thank you Cholyn. You will get bits and pieces, but I am leaning towards writing their own story sooner rather than later now. The burn has been turned up and is about to get hotter. Thanks for reading.
Author's Response:
Thank you Cholyn. You will get bits and pieces, but I am leaning towards writing their own story sooner rather than later now. The burn has been turned up and is about to get hotter. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/06/10 09:48 am
Over protective brother, I would hate to see how the parents are going to react. Thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
I know they are very close knit. Thank you for reading bayoumomma. Appreciate the review.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: 04/06/10 05:02 am
Happy belated birthday!! My birthday is June 4th!! Loved the update, and glad KC wasn't mad. Camille needs to see what happens, she likes him and it's obvious he likes her.
Author's Response: Thanks and happy early birthday, I knew there was a reason I liked you (I'm kidding). Glad you enjoyed it. She has two pleasures here business and her family so Jarrod has his work cut out for him. Sometimes liking isn't enough.
Date: 02/06/10 03:01 pm
Jun, I'm happy that I ate a few hours ago, because you are killing me with the food. lol
I really enjoyed this chapter. I liked the different dynamics in each budding relationships. The last line from KC was really cute. The visual aspect and the characters where balanced quite nicely, and it was easy to see them navigate through the party.
I'm looking forward to a little Camille and Jarrod one on one time. :D
Author's Response: I know I can't help the food thing too much Food Network. Glad you are enjoying the flow. Trying to put the criticism to good use but sometimes you get so involved in the story you can't see the forest for the trees. Thanks again for that and I As to Cam and Jarrod I will have to make a decision as to whether I want to do their story before or after. Thanks for reading and reviewing Cholyn. Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/06/10 08:26 am
Great!
I'm quite behind on reviewing; but I have been enjoying reading this story. You have included a lot of specific details and descriptions on the islands that have a ersonal and familiar touch.
Rielle and KC share an attraction but she's cautious and he's careful, following her lead.
Also, thanks for keeping it flowing with regular updates.
Author's Response:
I'm late on answering reviews so that makes us even because I try to answer them before I post a new chapter and I didn't this time. I think in these times we all need to be a little cautious you never know who a person could be after all. Thank you for spending some time with me on the island I appreciate it.
Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed [Report This]
Date: 31/05/10 08:52 am
I find Jarrod and Camille quite intriguing.
Author's Response: They would make for an interesting story. Let me think about it.
Date: 31/05/10 08:27 am