I hope she says yes, but even if she doesn't I'm sure KC will not give up. Nice update.
Author's Response: We live in hope. Thanks for your continued support. I appreciate that very much.
[Report This]Date: 15/05/10 06:21 pm
Hello Junebug,
I am enjoying your story, however since this is a review I must offer constructive critiscism...your chapters are just too short. Just when I am getting into the flow it's over. Therefore my charge to you is to write longer chapters or a lot more of them, at very frequent intervals, lol. I am confident you are up to this challenge. Please know that I am very much enjoying the journey of these interesting couples and looking forward to reading more.
A
Author's Response: Thank you for your honesty, my sister was saying the same thing. My husband however says that's called leaving something to the imagination. I'm working on making my chapters longer. Please continue to read and enjoy. Reviewer: Arabelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 15/05/10 11:34 am
Alrighty now, now there really are starting to move forward. Good to see now for more together up close and personal time. Mmmmmm can hardly wait!!!
Author's Response: Me either!!!
Date: 15/05/10 08:00 am
Dam!! way too short.
I just love this story.
With K.C. and Gabrielle living so close, nuff said.
please update soon.
Author's Response: I was getting the same thing from my sister who edits for me and I've been working on that. Will try to shoot for every couple of days, and yes a couple does mean two. Reviewer: Janetbd Signed
[Report This]Date: 14/05/10 05:06 pm
All right someone is making the move. Good for them. Nice to see K.C. going after what he wants
Author's Response:
I like to think his judgement is getting better and he's not going to let a quality woman get away. Hopefully she sees the same thing in him.
Reviewer: cimmy1 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 14/05/10 01:45 pm
Oh, snap!!! K.C. is making sure that Gabby knows that he is interested. He is going to take that bull by the horns and that is just fine by me. Keep those update coming, I love this story!!!
Author's Response: Gotta be careful, if you're gonna ride a bull you gotta hold on tight!!!
Date: 14/05/10 06:19 am
KC is about to make his move on his neighbor. Jarrod wants Camille, he is going to have his work cut out for him because of his profession. No long distance affair for her. Loved the updates!
Author's Response: Thank you for your support. I was tweaking the next chapters and haven't had a chance to respond to the last set of reviews.
[Report This]Date: 14/05/10 06:07 am
Thanks for the update. Is Jarrod interested in her or one of the other ladies, interesting.
Author's Response: Thanks for your continuing support. Jarrod is interested in Camille. Won't they make a lovely couple?
[Report This]Date: 14/05/10 06:01 am
Interesting update. Hope these guys aren't players. Those ladies better watch out.
Author's Response: You know sometimes it takes a good woman to settle a bad man. I think that has already been proven with his father. The women need to crack that whip and whip it good!
[Report This]Date: 14/05/10 02:19 am
June, that food sounds so delicious, and all I had was a chicken pot pie for lunch. lol
It sounds like things are about to heat up. I'm confused thought Camille's brother was married to Georgie? I must have misread the first chapter.
Author's Response: Sexy Bryan is interested in Andrea. Reviewer: Cholyn Signed
[Report This]Date: 14/05/10 12:19 am
I'm really liking how you merge their history and that of the island into the story.
Author's Response: Even though St. Sebastian is fictional there are several common cultural themes that run through the islands, whether it is food, music or other traditons that will be making an appearance. Enjoy!
[Report This]Date: 14/05/10 12:11 am
Great story. Thank You for the updates and the pictures , they really help bring the story to life. NOW FOR THE GETTING TO KNOW EACH OTHER BETTTER STAGE.>
Author's Response:
Here's to them getting closer. It should be interesting.
Reviewer: cimmy1 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 12/05/10 12:41 pm
Hound doggie, I love this chapter so much that I had to read it again. K.C. is so sexy, I want one of him!!! Oh, hot, butt naked sex is coming with a quickness. I hope that the goodness never stops!!
Author's Response: Now you know better than that if it's quick it ain't no good! I like a man with a slow hand!
Author's Response: Now you know better than that if it's quick it ain't no good! I like a man with a slow hand!
Date: 12/05/10 03:41 am
Loved the update. Hmm, KC is making his move already. I don't think Rielle stands a chance against all of that heat! Can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response:
Yeah but there aint nothing like some milk chocolate to melt down all over that! Ooh wait that sounds kinda dirty. Oh well.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 12/05/10 03:05 am
Makes me want to squeeze my legs together. They just met sexual tension is already running high. I am loving it. I'm a be WAITING
Author's Response: Squeeze them tight!
Date: 12/05/10 12:55 am
St. Sebastians does sound ideal. K,C's fiance is something else. I'm happy that he threatened to sue her skanky butt.
Author's Response: Gotta keep them skanks in their place.
[Report This]Date: 12/05/10 12:10 am
I like the set up to K.C.'s moms secret past. What happened to her, and why won't she talk about it?
Author's Response: Wait and see Grasshopper. I really appreciative of everyone's response to the cast and I have to say again thank you for your help. Reviewer: Cholyn Signed
[Report This]Date: 12/05/10 12:00 am
Love the cast pics.
Author's Response: Thank you and please continue to read. I know you've been sticking with the story and I appreciate it.
Author's Response: Thank you and please continue to read. I know you've been sticking with the story and I appreciate it.
Author's Response: Thank you and please continue to read. I know you've been sticking with the story and I appreciate it.
[Report This]Date: 11/05/10 11:54 pm
Love the cast pics.
Author's Response:
Thank you. I really wanted to put them up earlier but I think it is really good where it is.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 11/05/10 11:40 pm
Hmm, who is in the car? Yes, nothing much happened in this chapter, but I have a feeling that car is going to bring something interesting into Rielle's life.
I liked that you provided a brief history of the island, without distracting from the story.
Author's Response: You know it. Reviewer: Cholyn Signed
[Report This]Date: 11/05/10 11:40 pm
Yummy Cast!
Author's Response: I couldn't have done it without you! Thank you so much!
[Report This]Date: 11/05/10 06:47 pm
Just caught up with this story. Love the cast and story line looks like its going to make for a very exciting read. It flows really well and I look forward to reading more. Great job.
Author's Response:
Thank you glad you are enjoying it.
Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed
[Report This]Date: 11/05/10 02:49 pm
I am really enjoying this story. I can't wait for the hookup between these sistas and fine ass men.
Please update soon.
Author's Response: Your wish is my command. Reviewer: Janetbd Signed
[Report This]Date: 11/05/10 02:19 pm
Thanks for the update!
So, they've met and are attracted to each other. Great! Can't wait to read what happens next.
St. Sebastian sounds devine. My dream is to retire to a nice, beautiful island, live in a house overlooking the nearby beaches. St. John!
Author's Response: Can I come too? I like pina coladas and white chocolate. Thank you very much. Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed
[Report This]Date: 11/05/10 10:36 am
It is begining to have some real good feelings going on here i am really liking it. Thanks for the picture . NICE
Author's Response:
I want good feelings and GOOD FEELINGS if you know what I mean. I really think putting up those pics gives you another peak into the characters. Thank you for reading.
Reviewer: cimmy1 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/05/10 07:03 am