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Title: Chapter 40

Dam! Dam! Dam!

I think that Rielle won't hold what K.C. mother said to her, against her.

K.C. better explain everything and fast.



Author's Response: Hi Janetbd, you know he had a lot of time and she is going to have to like this explanation a lot. It will be interesting. Thank you for reading and reviewing.

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Date: 29/08/10 10:21 pm

Title: Chapter 40

A lot of explaining to do! At least mom likes her, I think!! Wonderful update.

Author's Response: Hi bayoumomma I don't know what he is going to say but it better be damned good. She misspoke and she'll do the right thing or else. Thank you very much for your continuing support.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/08/10 04:43 am

Title: Chapter 40

I don't think Rielle will rat Fredrika out. Reille is deep into family and she knows Fredrika likes her because she said so but it will hurt her for a little while that Fredrike said she wasn't the type of woman she wanted with her son before meeting her.

Author's Response: Hi Dimples, no I don't think she will snitch either. We will see if Frederika appreciates it. I appreciate your reading and reviewing and I will update tomorrow. Thank you.

Reviewer: Dimples Signed [Report This]
Date: 29/08/10 01:21 am

Title: Chapter 39

Hey Girl!

The loving was ON POINT as usual!

BAD K.C. using lovemaking as distraction lol.

He needs to come clean with Rielle before somebody else tells the rest of the story. . .

FANTASTIC work as always girl, and I can't wait for the next chapter!

Chel



Author's Response:

Miquerida, I thank you for your kind words and look forwarding to saying the same about Jack & Jill. You know men can't help it, when you put some good loving on them they don't know what to do with themself. Thank you again and enjoy.

Reviewer: miquerida Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/08/10 09:06 pm

Title: Chapter 39

Great update.

I hope that K.C. comes clean with Rielle, before she meets his parents.

 



Author's Response:

Hi Janetbd, I hoped he would come clean to but it wasn't meant to be. Thank you for reading and reviewing.

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Date: 20/08/10 02:27 am

Title: Chapter 39

Awesome update. If mom abd dad may possibly tell her his secret, he may want to start sharing this with her now.

Author's Response: Hi bayoumomma, happy you enjoyed it we need to make more love and less war. Whether he wanted to share or not it's gonna come out it would have been better to be up front with her.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/08/10 01:34 am

Title: Chapter 1

WELL! WELL! WELL! What the HEY!  GURL, this was just pure FIRE!  You know it is really sad when the people you read about seem so real. I am really rooting for them to make it, all it takes is honesty on his part more so than hers. She is giving him everthing, what does he think will happen when she finds out all of his secrets from some other person. Now if he would take as much time in being honest with her as he does SEXING her up then they would be GOLDEN. KC please stop being a FOOL. Gurl my eye almost fell out with the HOTNESS that was going on. Now where are his near nekked :) pictures. Update  soon please 

Author's Response: Hey cimmy1, I told you I like it hot. Nothing like some spice to light up hot and steamy Detroit. Honesty is the best policy and he has his reasons for doing what he's done. I only write the story I don't take the pics. Thanks for reviewing.

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Date: 19/08/10 11:14 pm

Title: Chapter 38

Great update!

I just love the way that you intertwine the pics into the story, so that I can see and feel the actual story.

K.C. better start talking before Rielle goes home with him to meet the parents. Secret is like guilt, it eats away you, till there's nothing left.



Author's Response: Hi Janetbd, happy to know you are still with me. I sometimes have to restrain myself with the pics but glad you like them. Gabrielle has been pretty good about not pushing the issue and I hope she continues to be calm in the face of whatever this may be. Keep reading and reviewing, I appreciate your time.

Reviewer: Janetbd Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/08/10 11:23 am

Title: Chapter 38

Girl, this chapter is ON POINT AS ALWAYS!

The Carnival pics are SO BEAUTIFUL and the details are so vivd I feel like I'm THERE lol!

Alex is cute.

Tiffani is not only a skank, but she's a idiot skank.  I didn't understand why she would cheat on the FIONE ass K.C., but know I do.  STUPID SKANK.

I'm glad that K.C. came clean with Rielle on some of what's going on; he just needs to tell it all and know that Rielle is ALWAYS in his corner!

chel



Author's Response: Hey chel, that chapter was practically wrote itself. There is nothing like a good Carnival and quite a few cities have them, so depending on where you live you might check it out. Girl Alex is a hunk of burning love. Tiffani is a hot mess and she needs to get herself together. If you know you can't be faithful be honest. I'm glad he came clean too, we'll have to wait and see about the rest. Rielle has been very understanding and loving she does accept all of him and I hpe she can accept this too. Thank you for taking the time to read and rreview. Waiting on M&MS girl!

Reviewer: miquerida Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/08/10 06:15 pm

Title: Chapter 38

Awesome update. No more Tiff, but he needs to share his secret with her before it backfires on him. Alex is fine, will he be coming back to hook up with a friend?

Author's Response: Hi bayoumomma, by now you know Tiff is a distant memory for K.C. as well as Gabrielle. He didn't share the secret soon enough and Alex is going to hook up with someone we haven't met yet. Thank you for your continuing support. I really appreciate your time and effort.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/08/10 05:02 am

Title: Chapter 38

Awesome update. No more Tiff, but he needs to share his secret with her before it backfires on him. Alex is fine, will he be coming back to hook up with a friend?

Author's Response: Hello bayoumomma, thank you. Tiffani may make another appearance but we know she is a hater and not worth our time. As to K.C. and his secret we will see how that goes down. I've got big plans for Alex that involve a Sister all ready in the works, can't wait to see how that works out! Thanks for reading and reviewing I still appreciate it.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/08/10 05:02 am

Title: Chapter 1

Gurl, This was a GREAT Chapter! Love the pictures anthe discription of everything. Now who the H*** is that fine piece of man meat in the black pants and shiny black muscle shirt. I would love to be the shirt on that man's back. How much ice cream did he have to sell again I want some. Thanks for another great update and the pictures you give us for VISUALIZATION. Man can I Visualize. GGRRR Growl.

Author's Response:

Hi cimmy1, I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. I try to make sure the pics are not too distracting but I think this time I failed. I found myself a little distracted by all of that yummy goodness also. I wonder how Gabrielle and the girls managed, but then they also have very hunky guys too. Now mop up your drool the story continues! 

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Date: 14/08/10 03:58 am

Title: Chapter 37

I'm all ears. I want to know how K.C. is gonna explain this one. I don't even understand what it means my self.

Please update soon.



Author's Response: Don't need ears for this one, need some tongue. The truth will set you free and hopefully he will remember that. Thank you for ready and reviewing I appreciate your time Janetbd.

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Date: 06/08/10 11:32 pm

Title: Chapter 37

KC and Rielle had better watch that ho , she is sneaky and dangerous. Rielle will have to forget she is a lady and beat her ass and send her home.

Author's Response:

Like I told miquerida would you rather be someone's bitch in jail or have your hot sexy boyfriend sucking on your toes. I'll take the toes anyday I don't know about you jai_03 but we all have to make our on choices. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

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Date: 06/08/10 07:34 pm

Title: Chapter 37

Awesome update. Psycho Tiffani is not gone for good, she will try something else. Loved it!

Author's Response: Thank you Bayou, she can try but I don't think she's gonna have any effect. Glad you are still enjoying them.

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Date: 06/08/10 12:12 am

Title: Chapter 37

Ole girl Tifanni couldn't leave quietly.  Damn what a skank!

I was ready to take off my earings and grease up when that skank was talking shit to KC and Rielle.  Guess I ain't a lady because ol' girl would have left with a good whooped ass! 

Good work as always!

Chel



Author's Response:

Now tell me the truth which would you prefer a cold jail cell the night before the biggest events of Carnival or your hot man jamming behind you while you are getting your party on? Let Tiffani get tossed in jail I'm gonna party!!! Hey!!! Remember Gabrielle got the man so she can afford to be the bigger woman and take all of that yummy K.C. goodness and revel in it!!! Gotta think bigger picture here girl!!!! Thanks for reading Chel.

 

Reviewer: miquerida Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/08/10 11:11 pm

Title: Chapter 36

I just thought of something with his mother thing. If it wasn't rape. You said his mom is really smart did that guy use her to cheat on some school exams and she not know about it. That was just another one of my guesses.

As for the skank Tiffani she is going to be trouble. I can't remember if he told Gabrielle about her or not. Either way I think he should have told her by now. I hope Rielle can see through her act she is about to put on. Yeah she needs a good beatdown before Gabrille send her on her way.

That B had some nerve calling KC a freak because of his size. He can't help it that he is blessed in the groin area and had the nerve to call him gay.



Author's Response:

Hi Dimples, that's an interesting guess. Tiffani is trouble but nothing our girl can't deal with cause she's got the man. Some of us are blessed more abundantly than others and we just have to accept ourselves. She's just jealous! Thank you for reading and stay tuned.

 

 

Reviewer: Dimples Signed [Report This]
Date: 30/07/10 08:49 pm

Title: Chapter 36

Wow! You described Carival so well that felt like I was actually there lol.

Poor KC's mother!  It's sad that see had to go through it, but I'm happy that she still has loyal friends on the island.

Tiffani can kindly take her phony self back to where she came.  KC is worried about Rielle's reaction, but I think she can handle such a vapid creature like Tifanni!

Can't wait for the next update!

Chel 

 



Author's Response:

Hey Chel, you need to experience a real Carnival! Nothing like seeing old friends and meeting new ones, listening to good music and shaking your booty getting your dance on, and eating good food I know always with the food. Tiffani will be taken care of never fear. Thank you girl I appreciate you.

 

Reviewer: miquerida Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/07/10 07:28 pm

Title: Chapter 36

Tiffani has made her appearnace, let's hope it's a short visit. Nice update!

Author's Response:

Hi Bayoumomma, I know what you mean she is a bitter woman and about to become even more so. Thanks for reading.

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Date: 30/07/10 03:00 pm

Title: Chapter 35

I can guess what happened to K.C.'s mother. I hope that Patrick is alive so that he could get his ass whop for what he did.

Great update.



Author's Response: Are you sure you can guess? Might not be what you think Janetbd. Thank you for reading and reviewing stay tuned.

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Date: 25/07/10 01:39 pm

Title: Chapter 35

Girl, this is SO GOOD!  I LOVED the party and how you had everyone having a good time before the @#$% hit the fan.  The food was on point as usual and made me very hungry lol!

What did KC find out about his mother?  I hope he finds Patrick Roebuck and kick his ass! YOU DO NOT MESS WITH MAMA!!!

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Chel

 



Author's Response: Hey girl, that was a rocking party. Everyone had fun but you know into every life a little rain must fall. But rain makes the flowers grow. Patrick got what was coming to him and the next chapter is soon to come. Thanks for reading & reviewing Chel I know you've got lots going on and I appreciate you taking time out to do both. 

Reviewer: miquerida Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/07/10 03:06 pm

Title: Chapter 35

He is scoring alot of points with the parents and grandparents.I can't wait to hear the big secret,I hope it doesn't affect his relationship with Gabrielle. Great update!

Author's Response: Hey bayoumomma K.C. is the gentleman his momma raised him to be. I hope it doesn't affect their relationship either. Thank you for reading. Glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/07/10 03:45 am

Title: Chapter 34

KC is still standing, so that's a good thing. I don't think things are going to be as good with the meeting of his parents. Once again love the visuals you include in your story.

Author's Response: Bayoumomma in the next few chapters he's gonna need to stand strong with what happens. You'll see what I mean. Glad you like the pictures sometimes it can be as time consuming as writing the story but I don't think this would be the same without them. Thanks for still enjoying my work and keep reading.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/07/10 05:44 pm

Title: Chapter 34

MAn they don't need to put meet on the grill, because they have already rolled KC of the grill and now he is done.

I can't wait to see what his mom will do when she meet them. I still feel there is going to be some fireworks.



Author's Response: Dimples you don't know the half of it. He still has a few surprises up his sleeve. Update coming up.

Reviewer: Dimples Signed [Report This]
Date: 20/07/10 03:41 pm

Title: Chapter 34

Damn, KC got grilled.   He should check to see if he had any grill marks on that magnificiant body lol.

Fantastic as always;  Can't wait to meet KC's people!

Chel 

 



Author's Response: Hey Chel, Haha love the grilling jokes. I am never far from the food thing am I. Thanks for the support and keep reading we will be meeting K.C.'s folks soon.

Reviewer: miquerida Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/07/10 01:36 pm

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