Wow, Michael finally made his move. Hope he doesn't hurt her.

Author's Response:

Hmm.. Let's see what happens on chapter 9...

thank you so much for sticking with me!

Well, you let Michael take her... Daminen is going crazy..What will Brain do.  Please protect Leight.

 Thanks for the update. 

Great update.

Author's Response: Thank you!!

Hey there KK, liked the lasted chapter, Damien and Leigh are great, and so sweet together, they give me a toothache.

I am glad that Damein and Brian are getting the ball rolling on taking down Michael, he has serious issues.

Can't wait for more.

This is moving fast.  I like the reaction of both Lucy and Leigh, they both are strong and while they are afraid, they don't want to be the victims. That's commendable.  Brian and Damien have a lot on thier hands to handle and they need to think quick.  I think Salvatore, is giong to take care of Micheal for them both espeically if he keeps messing up.  Can't wait to see what Micheal does now that Leigh didn't show up for the 'date'. 

Author's Response:

Hey my friend!!

Well, Thank you very much for taking yout time to comment. Next chapter will be up soon, and I hope you like it too. My brain is working hard to make this story enjoyable.

Hope you are well!

Awaahhh, those couples are too cute!! Update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you!!!! :-)

Great update KKM, I like how Brian and Daimen are trying to protect "their women".. I hope that Lucy and Leigh listen to them b/c Michael is dangerous.

Speaking of Michael, and Sal just make him disappear already. lol

Looking forward to more.

Finally got a chance to check this story out after hearing such good things about in the shoutout box...glad I did...been busy with summer state testing remediation beginning this week...

This is very good for your very first effort...however, I do feel that the relationship between Damien and Leigh seems a bit rushed (not meant as a criticism...just a bit more character development would have helped with their deep feelings for each other)...I also think that Damien's focus is a bit off...this is a serious investigation into Michael's dealings and people have been getting hurt/killed behind his actions...but I do like Leigh and Damien together...I do believe in instantaneous attraction...even love at first sight...but I'm a hard and true believer in business before pleasure...

I really can't get a good read on Michael...I know he is seriously sick and obsessed with Leigh...but why...and why does he seem to think that double crossing and dirty-dealing Salvatore will win him brownie points with Leigh...what's behind that...I do like the cat and mouse game going on between Micheal and Visconti...I guess there really is no honor amongst thieves...fascinating...

I really don't like the idea of Leigh meeting Michael alone...he's obsessed...which means he's also very dangerous...and when he discovers she's no longer chaste...what will he do to her...and to Damien...intriguing...

Looking forward to more...you're doing just fine...eagerly anticipating the next update...

Wow, Michael is really full of himself.  I feel Slvatore is gonna get rid of Michael soon. Leigh and Damien really didn't know each other well and I felt they moved too fast and need to slow it down a bit. Damien needs to focus on doing his job and not on getting in Leigh's pants. How unprofessional!

Author's Response:  Hey Baha_malo, I know Damien seems very impulsive, but he is a very passionate and caring man. Brian is a good influence on him. But I agree Damien needs to focus more on the job...maybe he will.. :-) Thanks for reading and reviewing, it really is appreciated!!

Don't worry about the scene being right...they will change as the circumstances change therefore they are always right for what they are written in.  Good job.

Damien messed up.  He should know better and now he has put the case in jeopardy and I want to smack him for it. Now he's gone and added gasoline to Michael's fire.  He'd better be good because he's gonna have to get her out of this. 

This was a great chapter.  Does Brian like Lucy - he appeared to be a little concerned.  I am glad Leigh and Damien are keeping things open and honest.  If she tells him all he can help her.

Now for Michael, what an ass...he needs some help - quick fast and in a heartbeat. 

This story is awesome and I loved the update.

Author's Response: Thanks! I am glad you're enjoying it. This is my first story ever, knowing that people like it means a lot!