You have me in suspense the way you ended this chapter. Great story so far. Keep up the great work.
Please post the next chapter as soon as possible (not trying to hurry you up).
Author's Response: Thank you! I hope I won't disappoint! Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 11/05/10 02:24 am
Loved the update!!! Did Michael set up this threat to Leigh?? Is he stalking her??? Looks like she and Damien have a connection. Can't wait to see how this develops.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 11/05/10 01:46 am
I just dicovered this story, and I like what I have read so far, I have a feeling this story is going to keep me on my toes. For you first time writing a story, its going well.
Looking forward to more.
Reviewer: lady liberty Anonymous [Report This]Date: 10/05/10 06:55 pm
I really like this so far. I also like that you ended with a cliff hanger. It gives me something to look forward to. Good job.
Reviewer: jjazz59 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 10/05/10 05:01 pm
Michael is threatening her, she will have to tell Brian and Damien. Thanks for the update.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: 10/05/10 02:09 pm
Hello KK,
First of all, let me tell you how much I enjoyed chapter 2, secondly how happy I am that you have seen the error of your ways in writing such a short chapter and leaving us hanging the way you have. Also how soon is soon, I'm ready for the next chapter any moment now. lol.
A
Author's Response: Thank you Arabelle! I am hoping to post chapter 3 by the end of the week.! Reviewer: Arabelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/05/10 11:36 am
This is interesting... can't wait for more. Does his new assignment have anything to do with his ebony goddess...
Nice!
Reviewer: Moni Anonymous [Report This]Date: 10/05/10 06:08 am
Michael is dirty, both Brian and Damian will need to be careful. They will need to watch out for both ladies. Loved the beginning of your story, looking forward to the next update.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: 10/05/10 03:42 am
I like the cast pics!
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: 10/05/10 03:26 am
Yay! Great start, interesting story and love the cast! Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]Date: 10/05/10 12:02 am
This is really interesting, please don't stop there!!!
Author's Response: I won't! I promise!
Date: 09/05/10 05:06 pm
That was a brilliant start. I can't wait for the rest of the story.
Author's Response:
Thank You so much! It's really encouraging having comments like yours. I hope I won't disappoint!
Reviewer: bookacholic247 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 09/05/10 11:51 am
Repeated itself. Got a bit confused. Otherwise good potential.
Author's Response: I know, I am sorry I didn't notice I had posted it twice..I will be more careful in the future. My mistake has been corrected.
Date: 09/05/10 11:47 am
Hello KK,
Congratulations on your first story, I hope it won't be your last. You did not disappoint, you are off to a fine start. I find I can hardly wait for the intrigue to begin. I love stories where there is a beautiful and spirited heroine, a dashing hero, and a vile and preverted villain, so thanks very much for including 3 of my favorite character types in a single story. Please update soon, and frequently.
A
Author's Response: Hey Arabelle! Thank you for your comment. I am a bit insecure about posting this story. I never done this before, your comment really brightened my day. I will post next chapter soon! Reviewer: Arabelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/05/10 11:14 am
Good start but then the story repeated itself! Feel a bit cheated!!
Author's Response: I posted it twice and never noticed. Sorry I will pay more attention in the future.
[Report This]Date: 09/05/10 09:54 am
Hey KK....I'm so happy you posted (I'm happy I went on today). I like it. I think it's a good start. I wish you must enjoying writing and coming up with all the plot twist. Have too much fun...that was for you, now for the story.
I like it. Good start. I think Mike is obessed with her, the classic, want what you can't have. It's gonna be something when he finds out there is someone else that wants her too...
Author's Response: THank you my friend!! You don't know how much it means o me! Reviewer: Caribbean Fire Signed
[Report This]Date: 09/05/10 07:01 am
Great start . I can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: 09/05/10 06:47 am
Love the cast pics.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 09/05/10 05:02 am
May I why you repeated yourself? I feel like I was shorted the chapter. I like Damien, me really likey!!!
Author's Response: I don't know what you mean..But I will check it out to see what's wrong. :)
Date: 09/05/10 03:14 am
My baby is all grown up and writing stories *tear*. I'm sooo extremely proud that you put out your first fic. How's it feel, my dear? Exhilerating right? See! I told ya :) This is definitely on it's way! I'm so happy :) *more tears*
Author's Response: I am crying too!! I will never thank you enough!
[Report This]Date: 09/05/10 03:11 am
love the pics!! more please!
Reviewer: brownskingurl Anonymous [Report This]Date: 09/05/10 02:41 am