I just read the whole chapter, and it reads so much better Kaye! You're doing such a great job with the writing of this. Michael seriously gives me the creeps and Damian is such a hottie. I can't get over how much progress you've made in these past couple of months since starting this. It's really coming along nicely. You should be VERY proud of yourself! 

Anticipating Chapter 13 sooner rather than later ;) 

Hey there KK. I was happy to see that you updated this story, and I see the DRAMA is about to begin... Michael is still a SICK FREAK, and I hope that Damien takes him DOWN.

Oh and is there anyway that maybe Damien can put his FOOT in Agent Scott's ASS, all this man cares about is catching Visconti I bet just to further is career.

Can't wait for more.

Please tell that Leigh gets out of the hostage situation alive?  I want to see those agents lose their badges. After he confesses, Michael needs to be shot right between his beady eyes.

Great job building the suspense entering the house.

Damn! Just when Darryl was redeeming himself from an ultra-jerk. At least he got a chance to apologize and make his peace with Leigh.

Unfortunately, with the master plan in the potty, Leigh is now on her own with a real nutcase.

I can't wait to read what happens next.

This was a totally assine idea, they should all lose their badges or at least get demoted.  The demotion depends on the outcome like if Leigh dies they should get fired.  Please let Damien ride to rescue!!

This story has it all: Obsession, suspense, murder and romance! I love it! (By the way, I'm just getting caught up. It's been a while.)

I'm going to assume Darryl isn't dead. I mean, you just got me to like him then he's out cold on the floor. Shame on you. (Just kidding!)

Keep the updates coming please!

Good chapter and I liked how Leigh put her foot down to say that Damien and Brian had to be there.  I think the person who's going to save her is going to be Daryl...he's cute too. but Micheal's gonna be his take down...afterall he's the hot FBI agent...

Nice work...I can't wait to see what happens at dinner.

Thank you for the update.  I can't wait to find out what happens next!!

Author's Response: thank you for reading! I am doing my best to update soon!

You know, you could totally do a spin off story with Agent Johnson! He seems like the type of guy that's had everything handed to him and hasn't really had to work for a woman. Definitely be thinking about that one, Kaye ;)

Anywhoo! Great update, dearest! I'm glad you're progressing with this. And no need to thank me for anything I do. That's what friends are for :)

Aww snap, those FBI fools are crazy.  I am so glad that Damien found her.  Agent Scott is already operating outside the box with how he kidnaped Leigh. Interesting and I hope that they both lose their badges and go to jail.  I don't like Darrly he is creepy.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!! Darryl is a cocky guy...but Damien will sort him out, hopefully!

So..the f**king FBI -huh..?! That was a interesting twist! And maybe some competition for the jealous Damien, now that Darryl have enter the scene..?

Author's Response: I know! Darryl is a cocky one!! But let's see what happens...thanks april for sticking with me!

That was highly irregular and completely against FBI procedure.  They have got to be dirty.  I hope that Damien kicks some FBI ass!!!  Love LEigh!

Author's Response:

thanks for commenting. well, the FBI is after someone else..

Emotionally charged, but much too short. Next please.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!