I live this story, I don't like Nicholas and I am so glad that she didn't fight the divorce.
Author's Response: thanks for liking the story! and i agree, she needs to move on. good riddance to bad rubbish!
Date: 01/09/10 03:49 am
Great update. Now I can see why Cherry is no longer in her life... It's about time those two move their relationship along. I just love it when a woman is bold and take matters into her own hands. You had me clapping when Aiyana got over her fears and do what she wanted to do for so long. But now she is about to play chicken again and run off I hope Christopher is about to shake things up a bit and lead the way in this relationship because I can see Aiyana taking one bold steps forward and three steps backwards because of her shaky past. Nice going...
Author's Response: Thank you for the claps huney! Yes sometimes we just need to take a risk and grab that bull by the horns! I am so glad that you enjoyed it and thanks for taking the time out to review!
Date: 20/07/10 11:44 am
Now that's more like it. Aiyana taking things into her own hands, so to speak. Ha!
They should take that bath together. Yep, I'm wanting her to corrupt him. But I'm thinking he might be able to teach her a thang or two. A young mind can be so inventive.
Hhahhahah yes they should do that! They should explore both of their apartments huh? It would be a good type of corruption ;)
Thanks for reading and reviewing!Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]
Date: 20/07/10 06:22 am
Oh My Goodness!!!!!!!! You better not keep us waiting on the next update. What a cliff-hanger. Ohhhhhhh! I was so, wanting to read more! As always great job and please don't make us wait too long.
Author's Response: Yay! Im glad you are aching for an update! I will try to grant your wish and update as soon as I can! Thanks for following along and reviewing!!! Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 20/07/10 06:02 am
Great update. Cherry was definitely a bad influence on Aiyanna. Hope she learned from her mistakes.
Author's Response: Yes she was, some friendships had to come to an end. Another lesson learned. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 20/07/10 05:45 am
Aiyana should just go ahead and bed this boy. When you're having dreams in the DAYTIME, ummm, it's time to act. hee...
I like this slightly older woman, younger man story. I'm thinking the real thang is going to blow Aiyan's mind, amongst other things.
Carlos needs to go away.
Author's Response: Right?! And they are both single, might as well! Glad your enjoying it! Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]
Date: 26/06/10 07:11 am
nice. she is attracted to him
Author's Response: Oh yes she is, now what will she do about it.... thanks for reading!!!
Date: 22/06/10 10:41 pm
OMG! That's dirty! It was a dream, oh man. I want another update and quick. I can't wait for these two to be together for real. Great update but I want more.
Author's Response: LMAO! Yea I wanted it to be as dirty as possible. Thanks for reading!!!! I will try really hard to write another chapter soon!
Date: 22/06/10 09:30 pm
Aiyana should give Chris a shot. Nothing wrong with an older woman, younger man. He is funny and charming, just what she needs after that jerk of an ex-huband. Love your story.
Author's Response: I agree! Age aint nothing but a number! Thanks for reading!
Date: 10/06/10 03:37 am
Thanks for a great update. I like Chris. Aiyana's soon to be ex what an idiot. She is lucky to be out of that marriage.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! She is lucky but she is still in shock, poor thing. Chris too. I like him as well. :)
Date: 10/06/10 03:07 am
Like the new chapter. At last, they meet again. I wonder how long it will take for her to remember him. It starting to get good. Hurry up with more.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! I really appreciate it!!! Reviewer: jjqaa59 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 31/05/10 07:27 pm
I liked it. Christopher and Aiyana are cute.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it! Thanks for keeping up! Reviewer: melanie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 31/05/10 01:25 pm
Wow, Nicholas is a sh*thead!!! He's been cheating on her all along and making her fell like the bad guy. I hope his relationship with Brenda sucks and he realises he let go a good thing. By then hopefully Aiyana will be in a loving relationship and preggers.
Brenda also has some nerve too. Like Aiyana said, "who's the slut now" as she was sleeping with another woman's husband. She's definitely fallen off her high pedestal of morality. Please let payback be a bitch for them!!!Especially the dirty dog after all he played all those mind games on Aiyana making her feel small when all the while having his slut on the side. Great update!!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it, hopefully good things will come for Aiyana. Thanks for reading!!!! Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]
Date: 20/05/10 07:03 am