Oh My Goodness!!!!!!!! You better not keep us waiting on the next update. What a cliff-hanger. Ohhhhhhh! I was so, wanting to read more! As always great job and please don't make us wait too long.
Author's Response: Yay! Im glad you are aching for an update! I will try to grant your wish and update as soon as I can! Thanks for following along and reviewing!!! Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 20/07/10 06:02 am
OMG! That's dirty! It was a dream, oh man. I want another update and quick. I can't wait for these two to be together for real. Great update but I want more.
Author's Response: LMAO! Yea I wanted it to be as dirty as possible. Thanks for reading!!!! I will try really hard to write another chapter soon!
[Report This]Date: 22/06/10 09:30 pm
Aiyana should give Chris a shot. Nothing wrong with an older woman, younger man. He is funny and charming, just what she needs after that jerk of an ex-huband. Love your story.
Author's Response: I agree! Age aint nothing but a number! Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 10/06/10 03:37 am
Nicholas is not one of my fave characters right now. They were all sitting around talking and drinking and what comes up usually comes out when you've had too much. How in the world is he going to lose his job because they heard something personal about him.That shouldn't affect his job performance so why does he think his job would be in jeopardy. Nice first chapter.
Author's Response: I agree! Its something you cant really take back, so you just have to apologize and move on! Thanks for reading!!!!
[Report This]Date: 17/05/10 03:51 pm
Oh man, he is right she shouldn't have said anything. She was just trying to fit in. Why is she socially awkward. This marriage is doomed I tell you doomed because he feels that she is always embarrassing him. As for the model and Chris...yeah Chris she is cheating on you that is why she is taking her Slinky lingerie on a trip. Thanks for a great start to the story.
Author's Response: Trying to fit in always gets someone in trouble because maybe that isnt where they are supposed to be. Too bad she isnt comfortable in being different like her friend Dee Dee. And yes Raven is a piece of work....more updates on both couples coming up! Thanks for reading!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 15/05/10 03:43 pm
Totally agree with baua_malo - WFT Aiyana! But I liked that she was in fault and not Nick. Looking forward to see where this goes, thank you!
Author's Response:
You liked that she was at fault? Do explain! Thanks for reading!!!!!
Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]Date: 15/05/10 11:15 am
What is wrong with her, that was some personal shit that she blabbed about? They won't married much longer will they, but what did she do at the last get together? I gotta know!!!
Author's Response: Yeah drunk or not, that wasnt a good move! Lol we will find out about the past soon enough! Thanks for the interest!!!!
Date: 15/05/10 05:14 am
I loved the start of this story. I'm sorry but I'm with Nick on this. So what if those wives appeared to be drunk and telling secrets , she shouldn't have trust any information especially to a group of strangers. That's just silly. I wouldn't have said sh*t as one never knows when things come back to bite you in the butt. He was justified feeling angry. Aiyana needs to do some soul searching as it seems this isn't the first time she has embarassed him. What the heck is up with this couple anyway???
Author's Response: Yeah and her story was a little more awkward for everyone else. She is only getting the heat because he witnessed it, which is very embarassing, especially in front of your boss! She's gotta do something quick to fix this! Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 15/05/10 02:02 am