I agree baha_malo - how did he end up tired up to a chair? How and when did they meet? The short left me curious but nonetheless good! Thank you!
Author's Response: I want to start a chaptered fic that would start off right after the end of this one. I just need to write it...
Date: 02/06/10 04:25 pm
Definitely an interesting short. It left me a bit curious though as to why she killed him.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 23/05/10 06:56 am
Thank you! You're my first reviewer, how exciting! I intend to continue this story in another fiction. I'm not sure if I am happy about the characterization of the woman so I going to have to figure that out.
Reviewer: starlitwisher Signed [Report This]Date: 23/05/10 01:39 am
Very interesting start , I hope there is more.
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: 22/05/10 04:41 pm