oh jesus....i love ur franklin!
Reviewer: janjan2009 Signed [Report This]Date: 28/11/12 03:51 am
The story line is great but some of the punctuation is killing me. It seemed like every other sentence had an exclamation mark after it. It kind of makes it hard to follow.
Reviewer: Paris Anonymous [Report This]Date: 30/07/10 06:47 pm
Oh my goodness! You had to stop there! I have to say that I prefer your Franklin over the one on TV. The show's Franklin is just a little too unstable for my tastes.
I wasn't expecting Eggs to be a were. I can't wait to see where this goes.
Reviewer: Candace Anonymous [Report This]Date: 23/07/10 08:57 am
Okay so you just can't Stop now. More please ... NOW!!!! Anyway , I find myself loving Franklin's possessiveness of Tara more and more. And I'm glad Franklin told the Tara about Eggs being a werewolf. Loved it, Great job . More Now ... PLEASE.
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 22/07/10 08:48 pm
Wow, what a predicament Tara is finding herself in being sandwiched between eggs and Franklin. Hmmm, are they gonna become a threesome now???!!!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 22/07/10 05:25 am
Oh hell naw tara leaving franklin to run into eggs arm uhhh makes me sick and sookie with her encouraging ass what she the only one that can be a fang banger uh serves tara ass right for quickly jumping into sex with eggs thats why he shifted on her ass that was hilarious then her scared ass get arrested and of course sexy ass franklin comes to the rescue and when the inferno tara/franklin start here come that dame dog eggs uhh !!!!i totally love this story please keep it coming!!!!
Reviewer: hershey_kisses Anonymous [Report This]Date: 22/07/10 05:13 am
Throught this whole chapter I kept saying OMG! What has Tara gotten herself into? They keep trying to change her, they need to let the girl decide for herself. I can't wait to see Franklin and Eggs go at it for Tara's heart. Love the update.
Reviewer: Chell Anonymous [Report This]Date: 22/07/10 04:52 am