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Title: Nineteen

You went with  realistic ending and showed great respect for your characters. They (especially Lily) needs time to sort themselves out and it was an excellent point about "young love" and needing to learn each other again. They had both been so caught up in the young love aspect that they sort of breezed by his betrayal and the fact that he left to begin with. So, all that is to say I am very pleased with the ending.

Now......

You writing a sequel right? With them getting closer and crazy Nick in the background right? You're starting that now right? Right? RIGHT? I can't hear you.... Okay, I'll look for that new story next week.  



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're pleased with the ending. It was important to me to stay true to the characters.

I apologize, but I'm having trouble understanding your second paragraph.  

 

Reviewer: Onimosity Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/04/11 08:48 pm

Title: Nineteen

This was a perfect, open-ended conclusion to a drama filled story, LOL.

I had sympathy for both Billy and Lily in this fic. They both made some poor decisions en route to this place they ended up. But I'm glad they arrived at a point where they could ackowledge those mistakes, and learn from them to hopefully become better people, with a stronger relationship.

Thanks for sharing! I enjoyed the journey.



Author's Response: Thanks for commenting! I'm glad you thought it was a perfect ending. 

Reviewer: emme Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/04/11 05:53 pm

Title: Nineteen

Wow don't what to say but wow amazing chapter. We know  why billy left lily glad he told her the truth. But it like she said both men want her so badly they didn't care they hurt her or not. It was all about them but now a baby is coming and who ever the father is going to need to step up to the plate and take care of the baby.  Glad you post a chapter it was very good and thanks for the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/04/11 02:27 am

Title: Nineteen

I love it!! (Wipes tear.)  What a great ending!  Thank you for sharing your work.  

PS ha on Nick, the jerk.

 

Reviewer: OliviaDuBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/04/11 02:21 am

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