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Title: Four

wow that was wow. i'm glad she getting somethings off her chest to let him know how bad he hurt her but poor hot billy still don't get it. he hurt her bad and if he knows anything about lily she not going to run off with him and break nick heart. thanks for the update.

Author's Response:

Billy is an alpha male, do they rarely get it? 

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 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/01/11 09:56 pm
Title: Four

Why did billy really leave?

Author's Response:

Lily pretty much said it in chapter four, although there's a bit more to it.

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Reviewer: Tiffany Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 18/07/10 05:24 am
Title: Four

So I am dying to know why he left and the real reason that he's back NOW. And to see more of Nick (a character that bored me to tears on the show) and Lily's interactions. 

Great dialogue, by the way. Soapy without being SOAPY.  



Author's Response:

I've given a few of hints as to why he left, and chapter three gave some as to why he returned. I'm glad you liked the dialogue. I say it over and over again, but if I don't get anything else right. I hope that I have good dialogue... although sometimes that's the only thing I get right. LOL

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 Reviewer: Onimosity Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/07/10 04:49 am
Title: Four

Loved it . The best line " your answer isn't going to satisfy" "me". SWEET. She better wake up and decide if she really wants tha HUSBAND of her, cause someone else really wants her BAD. I would be very afraid. Go home and hide girl. Thank You. Update Please :0). 

Author's Response:

LOL, Cimmy, Lily may want to run for the hills.

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Reviewer: cimmy1 Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 18/07/10 03:40 am
Title: Four

I love how you manage to make me feel bad for both Lily and Billy.

My heart hurts now, but it still somehow remains hopeful. 

Excellent chapter. I cannot wait to read what happens next. 



Author's Response:

I'm glad that you felt something the emotions in the chapter. I sometimes worry about having a disconnect with the reader.

Thanks for taking the time to comment.  

 Reviewer: Almoundy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 18/07/10 03:13 am
Title: Four

Loved the update!  I feel bad for both Billy and Lily, and think it's great that the story makes you feel for both characters.  Loved Lily standing up to him, but loved how Billy won't back down.  Lily's life is about to turned upside down, and I can't wait to see what happens next.  Thanks for sharing :) .

Author's Response: I didn't plan it that, lol. These characters seem to do whatever they want, especially Billy.

Reviewer: emme Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/07/10 09:21 pm
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