ok now i don't like billy lol but that so cute how he found her charm bracelet and ask her out adorable and nick he got nice charm too. but is his charm enough to hold on to lily or will she chose billly mmmmmmmmm thanks for the update.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed
[Report This]Date: 14/01/11 10:15 pm
I liked this chapter. I am sucker for young luv. Plus, the fact that she does care for Nick "The Boring" Newman. It will make Billy's plotting all the more interesting.
Reviewer: Onimosity Signed [Report This]Date: 27/07/10 06:33 am
Thanks for the update Cholyn.
I must say I was never a Billy/Lily fan. I am a diehard Cane/Lily fan, that said I am however enjoying your story. What I enjoyed most about this chapter is that you show Nick and Lily actually love each other, that is the component that a successful triangle must have. Both candidates for the heart of desired must truly love her/him. In the Y&R version, I was never sure of how much Billy actually cared for Lily, that's why I think a Billy/Lily/Cane triangle would have been difficult to achieve. You are however addressing this oversight magnificently and so I anxiously await reading how your story will further unfold.
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Author's Response:
Arabelle, thank you for reviewing and I'm glad you like the story. I hope you still like it after the next chapter. lol
I thought that Billy started to fall for Lily, because other wise, he wouldn't have confessed. The office and cabin scenes show that clearly. I really liked the J-Quad storyline, imo, it's the best quad Maria has written, each character was different, they had chemistry, and they brought good ratings.
Reviewer: Arabelle Signed [Report This]Date: 25/07/10 05:46 am
How old is billy and nick and how old is lily.
Author's Response:
Billy (18) Lily (24) Nick (30)
Reviewer: Tiffany Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 25/07/10 05:44 am
Loved this chapter, and the flashback scene. And I loved the touch with the charm bracelet. This is a great story, and I can't wait for the next update. Thanks for sharing :) .
Author's Response:
I feel like a fraud if I take claim for the bracelet, when it was all the muse. I didn't know about it, until I wrote it. lol
Reviewer: emme Signed [Report This]Date: 25/07/10 03:53 am