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Title: Eight

omg what the heck going on. first chole is going to help him by taking her diary. billy love her i get that but you are lily best friend for a long time if billy wanted her back that fine but helping him break up her marrige is wrong on so many levels and she should think on how  this going to make lily very upset with her. nick need to stop putting work before her and billy need to stop lying and playing people so he can use them to get lily back.  you doing good job on this story and thanks for the update

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the comments! Kate, Kate, Kate. well in her defense Billy did put her back against the wall. Nick really does need to stop putting his job before his wife. 

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/01/11 10:52 pm

Title: Eight

Love how the plot is just rolling along. Things are getting intense, and I have a feeling they'll only get more intense before this story is over, LOL. Of course Kate would be the one to help out Billy, she knows that Lily/Nick isn't right, lol. Can't wait to see what happens next. Thanks for sharing!

Reviewer: emme Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/08/10 07:45 am

Title: Eight

acknowledging the cracks in a marriage...that's just a couple of steps before the break. Mwah ha ha.

 Nice to know Kate is still clHOE in any universe.

Reviewer: Onimosity Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 24/08/10 10:15 pm

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