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Title: Fourteen

Excellent chapter.  Loved the confrontation between Billy and Nick!!

 

Reviewer: OliviaDuBelle Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/02/11 03:17 pm

Title: Fourteen

wow i can't belive it she make love then tell him to leave lol wow  she better go get him thanks for the update

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/01/11 11:23 pm

Title: Fourteen

I knew Lily had power over him should she ever choose to wield it. Mixed feelings about the adultery, gotta admit. But what was there was hot. And wrong.

So like Billy to leave and then come back thus keeping his word.

And La Sharon is still around. I want her to spill her guts!

Great update! 

 



Author's Response:

Onim, in rl I am so anti-adultery, so it took a lot for me to write this story. It was the damn song that put this story into my head, lol.

Billy admitted in chapter...four or five that Lily had the power to make him call it off, so he had to be extra tough with her.

 

Thanks for sharing your thoughts. : ^ ) 

Reviewer: Onimosity Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/11/10 03:37 am

Title: Fourteen

My favorite chapter so far...And the plot thikens ! I simply love how Billy is still machiavelan Billy and yet manages to be so tender with Lily!

I cannot wait till the next chapter, any Sharon/Lily/Nick confrontation is going to be so good!



Author's Response:

I love the old swaggerific Billy. It's to bad he no longer exists on the show.

Thanks for commenting.  

Reviewer: diarylover Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/11/10 12:17 pm

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