I love your story. Billy makes me sick. He's got Lily. She has him too, but it seems that he can affect her more. I do want them together, but after reading how he left her years ago make me want to strangle him. I don't care if her marriage to Nick isn't going to work, the nerve he has just thinking that she will automatically turn to him. Yes, I know she is still in love with him and him with her, but he left her an now all these years later it seems he is still in control and manipulating as ever, with a determination to get back someone who he royaly messed up with. I just want him to suffer more than he has for what he did to Lily. He is too arrogant for his own good. Lily told him to leave and he left, but then again he didn't. Then he says she acted like a Bitch but he doesn't want her hurt.

Billy is such a selfish child. All he has done is hurt her and when she start dishing out all the pain that he caused her, he can't take it and says she's acting like a bitch! Oh, he should have been getting the bitch attitude non-stop and on top of that he should have got ignored to death. But since he did not, take it out on him some other kind of way. I just don't want Lily to be the poor broken little damsel he left seven years ago, again. Yes she still loves him, but he needs to come correct. It's all about him and what Billy wants, and what Billy needs, in that exact moment. Anyway, I could go on and on.

You are good, you have made Billy's character the way so many men are, not all of course, but some and Lily's character the same way. Can't wait for more!

Well here we have another example of "Hell has no Fury". Sharon go get your then maybe Lily can too.

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