Oh this was good....very intense. My sense of dread grew with every line until the final reveal that Lily is pregnant.
I hope it's Billy's, I really do. And if it's not, I hope that doesn't stop them from being together. Those Loveable Adulterers.
But Nick...freaky...borderline abusive. Lily is a better woman than me to forgive him for the fall or maybe she's still feeling guilt about Billy.
We'll see...can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
I'm happy that you found the chapter to be intense. I wasn't sure how it would come across.
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Reviewer: Onimosity Signed
[Report This]Date: 08/02/11 02:16 am
I just…there's so much I could say, LOL. I guess I'll simply go with, Nick is disgusting. And no matter what he says, his actions prove that he does not love Lily.
Lily is simply the antithesis of Sharon, and since he loathes the fact that he desires a woman like Sharon, he's clinging to Lily. That's not love.
Even if Billy was nowhere in the picture, even if things never worked out between him and Lily, Lily needs to get herself far away from Nick.
Thanks for sharing this great story and chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks for commenting! Reviewer: emme Signed
[Report This]Date: 07/02/11 11:28 pm
baby baby what ummm baby holy crap didn't see that one coming lol. she having a baby and nick think it his but it can be billys omg wow this some crazy stuff. first she find out the truth about nick sharon and his son now she about to have a baby that may or may not be her husbands wow girl i'm speechless and that not a easy thing for me lol. great great update and thank for the update.
Author's Response:
Aww thanks WWE!
Yeah, Lily hasn't had the best 24hrs, lol.
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Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 07/02/11 07:23 pm