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Title: Seventeen

I'm finally caught up - and a cliffhanger at that!!!

 

Excellent story!!

 



Author's Response:

You know I love a cliffhanger.

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Reviewer: OliviaDuBelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 22/02/11 03:31 pm

Title: Seventeen

Well, Billy is finally growing up. I know it's sad but I don't feel sorry for him at all. My heart goes out to Lily of course, but Billy and his need to be in control of everything did this and I am glad he has finally realized that.

Author's Response:

I sort of felt bad for him, but he did contribute to this situation. 

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Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/02/11 07:39 am

Title: Seventeen

When you do short you do deadly...

Wow.

 I'm so glad that Billy is realizing what he's done and the games he's played and how his behavior and not just Nick's led to Lily being injured.

So glad the reasoning for his return was given. Yes I knew it was the picture but it was what he saw in the picture, the lack of joy in her. Now everything he's said to Jack he has to say to Lily PLUS explaining WHY he left and WHY  he stayed away.

Compact and Powerful was this chapter. Lawd, I'm channelling Yoda.

Wait for more, I cannot. 



Author's Response:

LOL@ Channelling Yoda.  I will answer your question in the next few chapters.

Thanks for commenting.  

Reviewer: Onimosity Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/02/11 04:35 am

Title: Seventeen

wow talk about raw passion.  I belive billy would had done what he said to jack if lily died but wait to he found out she knock up all hell is realy going to break lose and thing going to get lot more crazy and love it. thanks for the update.

Author's Response: You're welcome and thanks you for commenting! 

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/02/11 07:31 pm

Title: Seventeen

I wait with beted breathe to see what comes next. LOVE IT. TO BUT POWERFUL. THANK YOU.

Author's Response: Thanks for commenint! I'm galde you loved it. 

Reviewer: cimmy1 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/02/11 12:42 pm

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