Well here we have another example of "Hell has no Fury". Sharon go get your then maybe Lily can too.
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[Report This]Date: 15/01/11 03:56 pm
omg he so stupid teaming up with that hefa sharon how stupid is he stupid stupid thanks for the update
Author's Response:
Billy wants to believe he has control!
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Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 14/01/11 11:40 pm
wow i can't belive it she make love then tell him to leave lol wow she better go get him thanks for the update
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 14/01/11 11:23 pm
omg he has a son with the woman he cheated on with lily wow he is his father son. it was nice billy holding her but if he watned her to forgive him he need to be honest about everything with her for them to move on thanks for the update
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 14/01/11 11:14 pm
oh hell naw forget everything bad i said about billy i say go lily be with him and cut of nick thing. that bastard cheat on her many time. no billy and lilly forever. but still dont like the fact that he got her diary lol. thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
LOL! I loved this review. Yeah, Nick is just....
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[Report This]Date: 14/01/11 11:11 pm
oh crap billy is at the house what is going to happen next. now nick shouldn't be mad at her for the dinner thing with billy how did she know he be there and that she eat dinner with him. thanks for update.
Author's Response:
Nick really didn't have the room to be angry.
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Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 14/01/11 11:07 pm
wow i'm getting to see why she didn't have kids with nick because him being so busy and it alwasy work she wanted a father in her children life. thanks for the update.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 14/01/11 11:00 pm
wow funny that nick called her a tiger too lol i proably done the same thing and chock on my drink too lol. thanks for the update.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 14/01/11 10:57 pm
omg what the heck going on. first chole is going to help him by taking her diary. billy love her i get that but you are lily best friend for a long time if billy wanted her back that fine but helping him break up her marrige is wrong on so many levels and she should think on how this going to make lily very upset with her. nick need to stop putting work before her and billy need to stop lying and playing people so he can use them to get lily back. you doing good job on this story and thanks for the update
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the comments! Kate, Kate, Kate. well in her defense Billy did put her back against the wall. Nick really does need to stop putting his job before his wife.
[Report This]Date: 14/01/11 10:52 pm
wow that a nice song. Now i know billy love lily and he doesn't wanted her to get hurt but little does he know he hurting her too. you make sure nick has all this work so he can miss dinner and you can have the change to be with lily. I say if he loves her truly do then he let her come to him if she chose to be with billy. thanks for the update.
Author's Response: Billy has a long way to go, before he realizes that he needs give her some space.
[Report This]Date: 14/01/11 10:36 pm
what he team up with adam oh hell naw lol. is adam spying lily for him or the newman company or maybe both mmmmmmm intersting very intersting. cane and billy are a trip lol. it good he going to have billy back but not cool if he going to help him steal lilly away from nick? thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you enjoyed Cane. Yeah, I really like him and Billy. Adam is a sneaky one,
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Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 14/01/11 10:26 pm
ok now i don't like billy lol but that so cute how he found her charm bracelet and ask her out adorable and nick he got nice charm too. but is his charm enough to hold on to lily or will she chose billly mmmmmmmmm thanks for the update.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 14/01/11 10:15 pm
wow that was wow. i'm glad she getting somethings off her chest to let him know how bad he hurt her but poor hot billy still don't get it. he hurt her bad and if he knows anything about lily she not going to run off with him and break nick heart. thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
Billy is an alpha male, do they rarely get it?
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Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 14/01/11 09:56 pm
wow tiger lily yeah he wanted to make sure that he get to nick big time lol. Jack right he wanted lily back but the fact is he broke her heart and she has a husband and need to think about her feeling before things get out of hand. thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
Billy doesn't seem to understand the gravity of what he did.
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Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 14/01/11 09:47 pm
wow billy billy billy i understand why he came back because he miss her but he up and left her with out even telling her why and he expect her to fall in his arms and say take me billy lol. good she alright but only can image when victor and nick find out that her ex is back in town. glad she slap him thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
Billy had some nerves! She should have slapped him twice, lol.
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Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 14/01/11 09:40 pm
oh crap billy is back. why did he come back and why did he leave in the first place? intersting story.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 14/01/11 09:31 pm
I love this story! Nick is a tool! Can't wait to read more!
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Date: 01/12/10 01:18 am
I knew Lily had power over him should she ever choose to wield it. Mixed feelings about the adultery, gotta admit. But what was there was hot. And wrong.
So like Billy to leave and then come back thus keeping his word.
And La Sharon is still around. I want her to spill her guts!
Great update!
Author's Response:
Onim, in rl I am so anti-adultery, so it took a lot for me to write this story. It was the damn song that put this story into my head, lol.
Billy admitted in chapter...four or five that Lily had the power to make him call it off, so he had to be extra tough with her.
Thanks for sharing your thoughts. : ^ )
Reviewer: Onimosity Signed [Report This]Date: 30/11/10 03:37 am
My favorite chapter so far...And the plot thikens ! I simply love how Billy is still machiavelan Billy and yet manages to be so tender with Lily!
I cannot wait till the next chapter, any Sharon/Lily/Nick confrontation is going to be so good!
Author's Response:
I love the old swaggerific Billy. It's to bad he no longer exists on the show.
Thanks for commenting.
Reviewer: diarylover Anonymous [Report This]Date: 29/11/10 12:17 pm
Nick is such a slimmmme. And this is how you slip and fall into adultery. Sigh. I kinda wish he wasn't though. A teeny tiny part of me wishes it would be more of a struggle for Lily, and hey, maybe it will be. But with a kid and La Sharon out there? Oy vey. And THEN she'll have to deal with the fact that Billy knew all this. Oy vey again.
And kudos on a non Donkey Cane. He's smart and refused to drink! Wow.
Well done.
Author's Response: Thanks for commenting. lol @ Donkey Cane. I really like this version of him. Reviewer: Onimosity Signed
[Report This]Date: 25/10/10 07:53 pm
I LOVED Sharon in this chapter, I've never particularly been a fan of the character on the show. Seems like Miss Collins and Mr. Newman share more than just history. Do I sense an appearance from Noah on the horizon? Having Sharon be the owner of Symphonic Smells was a great twist.
Also, the LnB moment was great. It was the beginnings of a good convo. Can't wait to see where it goes.
Thanks for sharing!
Reviewer: emme Signed [Report This]Date: 13/10/10 10:21 pm
I really enjoyed this chapter. Nick, ugh, is there a five-year-old lil Cassie or Noah out there? I was very anti-adultery, even for LnB, but if Nick was cheating first...ugh. Plus the way he was checking out Sharon. Ugh.Lily and Billy together and talking, the passenger part was pretty poignant. Definitely want more.
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[Report This]Date: 12/10/10 05:03 am
There was a very interesting contrast in this chapter between Billy remembering the Lily that was and the life of the Lily that is. Hope you update soon.
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[Report This]Date: 11/09/10 04:26 am
Thanks for the update! I was behind a chapter, but these were great. Love, love, love how the plot is thickening. Nick, smh, he had his chance, and he's completely wasted it. Now Lily is pissed, and is prone to making some rash decisions, LOL. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Also, the part with the diary was a nice touch :) .
Reviewer: emme Signed [Report This]Date: 10/09/10 10:11 pm
The Nilly loving didn't bother me, kept it convincing. Really looking forward to the next update.
And i kinda like lil' stephanie.
Reviewer: Onimosity Signed [Report This]Date: 30/08/10 02:50 am