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Title: Chapter 1

Interesting start.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/07/10 08:00 am

Title: Chapter 6

I am loving this story, you gave Professor X a life and love.  How did he fall for a woman so evil?  I want something bad to happen to Sarah?  Is that wrong of me to want that?  Excellent story and Ican't wait to read more.

Author's Response: No it's not wrong. I wanted Logan to drop the house on her but that would suck for future chapters.

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/07/10 11:37 pm

Title: Chapter 6

The this story is great so far. Please coninue. Love Charles' twins.

 

 



Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: jjazz59 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/07/10 08:27 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Great start to the story.  So Professor X has twin daughters and Logan likes Faith and these daughters are black? This is a different twist on the Xmen.  Thanks

Author's Response: Yes, in the comics he was wanting Storm so I'm staying true to his chocolate love.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/07/10 12:15 pm

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