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Title: Chapter 1

The second chapter is good also, the story is coming along nicely. More updates

Reviewer: the girl next door Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 22/07/10 07:50 pm

Title: Chapter 1

I posted a review yesterday, I guess it didn't take. I'll just say I love the start of your story, and love the cast you've selected.

Kevin needs a beatdown in the worst way. Why didn't the parents or even her sis step in to help, they had to have known. Those twins are Grayson's , question is why did she not tell him?



Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I deleted the story by accident so that's why your review isn't up. Hopefully, the second chapter will answer some of your questions.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/07/10 07:15 pm

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