Their first kiss was so beautiful and sweet! Jared is just so damn dreamy! Still love, love, love Gavin and Waverly! I like the little father/daughter moment they shared.
This however had me saying Oh My God aloud:
“Neither one of them deserve this. I have known Cameron since I was 16, and when he married Brett she became the sister I never had. So, my protecting them is not totally about the campaign and Cameron’s political goals, it is their marriage as well. We are like a family. I will do whatever is necessary to keep it from being torn apart.”
What in the world are Brett and Waverly up to??? What could possibly tear Brett and Cameron's marriage apart? (Of course I don't expect you to answer, this is just my commentary :)
Loved the update Harlen and keep 'em coming! :)
Author's Response: Hi Idjunkie, I always love hearing from you. Gavin and Waverly are close and you know Gavin is Mr. Fix It. The Waverly, Brett and Cameron issue is going to unfold soon. Thank you so much for your feedback and reviews. Reviewer: idjunkie Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 29/08/08 06:55 am
I wonder what deep secret Brett and Waverly are trying to hide.
Author's Response: Hi Lady Liberty, I plead the fifth.
[Report This]Date: 28/08/08 09:47 pm
Thank you! Thank you! for another update I so loving this story I will not complaint about one chapter a day! I hope they do a movie together. Christian Bale and Thandie Newton are Hot!
Author's Response:
Hi Hopieland, I am usually about 2 chapters ahead, this weekend I was able to write and now I am about 5 chapters ahead..so I just want to get these out there...there are some really good things coming up. Thank you sooo much for your feedback. I really appreciate it. I am so glad that you are enjoying it. You are not alone...I think CB and TN would have awesome chemistry together.
Reviewer: Hopieland Anonymous [Report This]Date: 28/08/08 08:19 pm
Love Brett's little talk with Jared. Too funny! Now, I'm a little worried about this secret Cameron and Brett have. Is it that bad?
I hope you allow Gavin and Grace to become a couple. First, Grace needs to dump Ethan. Image can only take you so far and it's not worth your soul.
Update soon!
Author's Response:
Hi Lovemboth, Brett definitely knows Jared, but like she said she is a woman first. Gavin and Grace have been friends for a long time, there is a lot of respect there....we shalll see.
Thanks so much for your feedback!
Reviewer: lovemboth Signed [Report This]Date: 28/08/08 05:09 am
I'm loving this and you couldn't have picked a more perfect time to post this story, with the election and all! :)
I'm so a fan of Gravin!!! (<--- I suck at coming up with combined couple names) I already liked Gavin, now I love him, even though if he pursued Grace he'd be an accomplice to adultery but an eye for an eye, right?
Who's this detective and what does he know and how did he find out? I know, you can't tell me but I need to know... so that means you need to update soon... pretty please! :) Great update Harlen!
Author's Response:
Hi IDJunkie, you are so right as far as timing. When the John Edwards story broke, I couldn't believe how ironic it was.
Gravin....I love it! They have been simmering for a while, so we will see if they ever cross that line.
We are going to see more of the detective...he really doesn't know who he is dealing with. Thanks again for the feedback...I will be updating soon.
Reviewer: idjunkie Anonymous [Report This]Date: 27/08/08 11:25 pm
This story keeps getting better and better. I can't wait to see wherer you are going!
Author's Response: Hi Hopieland, I am so glad you are enjoying it. There is a lot more to come...some interesting turns for everybody. I hope you keep reading! Thanks for your feedback.
Date: 27/08/08 09:18 pm
Dang it, I am like a crackhead waiting for my next fix trying to figure out this big secret.
I am an official member of the Gavin/Grace love affair!!!
Author's Response: Hi Sweet Pea, Well I am more than happy to feed you addiction! Things will be coming together. I am about 5 chapters ahead of you. I will put u down with G&G fan news letter! Thanks for your reviews. I really appreciate them. Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed
[Report This]Date: 27/08/08 07:39 pm
Oh, I like Gavin. He knows how to handle his buisness and aparently Grace's too. And Ethan keeps on smiling like the pro he is, I love it.:)
Great update!
Author's Response: Hi TBG, Yes, Gavin is mr. fix it. Ethan is the ultimate politician. Thanks for the feedback. Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed
[Report This]Date: 26/08/08 05:47 am
Okay, that's it. Grace needs her own fic, show, whatever. She's just entertaining as hell. I'm staring to really like Gavin too. Liked how he handled that situation so smoothly. Nice chapter Harlen.
Author's Response: Hi BlackMamba, Grace isn't finished yet! Gavin does look out for his friends. Thanks for the review. Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed
[Report This]Date: 26/08/08 05:30 am
Great chapter. Jared and Payton are cute and as always LOVE Grace. She rocks.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the compliment. I always appreciate your feedback.
Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed [Report This]Date: 26/08/08 05:24 am
Grace had my rolling!! And who would turn out to be her knight in shining armour, Gavin (Mr. Big)!!
Author's Response:
Hi Sweet Pea,
Mr. Big....coming to the rescue. Grace could use a hero right about now. Thank you for all of your comments. I really appreciate them.
Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed [Report This]Date: 25/08/08 08:50 pm
Great update Harlen! I don't know if I was suppose to laugh at the drunk and stumbling Grace but I did. Thank God Gavin was there... I really like him. He seems on top of his game!
Brett had me LOLing a lot too! Especailly for this:
….that last chick I met that you were with….the model? I was about to buy her the Hooked on Phonics for Beginners.”
Very funny! It's nice to see Jared taming his bachelor ways for a good woman and I'm super impressed with Payton's professional abilities. :)
Author's Response:
Hi IdJunkie,
Grace definitely has her moments. That is why I had to go with Victoria Rowell. I can really picture her doing this.
Brett doesn't know subtle..but she means well.
They are not cutting Jared a break. He is trying to change his ways.
Thank you for all of your feedback. This is so great coming from you.
Reviewer: idjunkie Anonymous [Report This]Date: 25/08/08 08:14 pm
I'm really feeling this story!
Author's Response: I am so glad you are enjoying it. I really appreciate your comments and feedback. I hope you enjoy what's coming up. I am actually about 4 chapters ahead. Thanks again.
Date: 25/08/08 08:00 pm
I just discovered this story and I must say, you sure know how to spin a tale. The plot line is really intriguing, there is the obvious love story, but also there is a hint of something sinister. My kind of story. I can't wait to read more. great job so far.
Author's Response: Hi Luciangirl, I really appreciate the compliment and feedback. I am so glad that you discovered this story. There are a lot of twist and turns...I hope you enjoy the next chapter, I will be updating soon. Thanks again.
Date: 25/08/08 02:16 pm
I love this story! I'm so excited someone did one with Christian Bale.
Author's Response: Hi Lskreet, I am so glad you are enjoying it. I really appreciate your review. Christian Bale...what can I say? He is just so yummy. He was not my first choice, but when I really thought about the character's personality. I wanted someone with swagger and vulnerability...he is the one.
[Report This]Date: 25/08/08 03:41 am
Payton smiled at him “Nothing good comes easy.”
Amen to that. Just ask Grace. :)
Loved the chapter, espeically Grace watching the new coverage. Jared and Payton are still adorable and love the mix up with the dog. Though I must wonder with all the shady dealings going on around them how long it will be before they're dragged into that mess. I'll enjoy it while it lasts.
Great chapter Harlen!
Author's Response: Hi TBG, Grace is going through a hard time and all of the press coverage is spinning her deeper into depression. There is a lot in store for J & P...thank you so much for all of your feedback. Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed
[Report This]Date: 24/08/08 03:57 am
I can't wait to see what Grace has up her sleeves. That's going to be interesting. Jared and Payton are so cute. Glad he's in the know about who Bailey really is and thought it was cute that she played along with it... just stringing him along! I'm really anticipating their date! She does go out with him, right? Great update Harlen!! :)
Author's Response:
Hi Idjunkie! There is definitely more to Grace than meets the eye. Payton tries to play hard to get...not very well though. Thanks for the feedback.
Reviewer: idjunkie Anonymous [Report This]Date: 22/08/08 09:38 pm
Great update. I cant wait for P/J to get closer , please update soon.
Author's Response: Thank you for the compliment. I will be updating soon. Reviewer: ellenangel69 Signed
[Report This]Date: 22/08/08 08:41 am
WOOHOO!!! Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: I will be updating soon, thanks for writing!
Date: 22/08/08 04:50 am
Jared thinking that Bailey was Peyton's BF was funny, I hope she gives Jared a chance.
Author's Response: Jared and his ego just assumed it had to be another man! Jared will learn...eventually. Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 22/08/08 02:16 am
Look at Jared trying to cut off loose ends so he can have a real shot with Peyton! Men need to take note, that is what you do if you want a real shot with a good woman!
Author's Response: Jared is surprising himself about how serious he is. He is not taking any chances!
[Report This]Date: 21/08/08 08:12 pm
Great insight into Gavin's character. Of course, now I'm wondering how he's double crossing 'cheating' Ethan. Could he be meeting someone at said hotel, that will betray Ethan's trust in him!!
Author's Response: Sweet Pea you are too funny. No comment!
[Report This]Date: 21/08/08 07:50 pm
‘A politician will double-cross that bridge when he gets to it.’ Creepy, so much dirt.
I really loved the fight between Grace and Ethan it was so intense to watch the break down of this marriage. So much pain and resentment on both sides and yet they remain trapped it this political marriage. It felt like I could've been peaking inside the life of a real politician! Great update Harlen
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review. I really appreciate. I hope you enjoy what's comin up soon. Reviewer: greatodinsraven Signed
[Report This]Date: 21/08/08 07:20 pm
Damn Grace is pretty hardcore hahaha. I like her. Like the vbanter between Jared and Payton. And this:
Jared couldn’t stop looking at her perfectly round behind in those flawlessly cut grey pants. He could picture in his mind having her on his yacht and what she would look like in a tight little string bikini. He could see himself smacking it and rubbing it down with tanning oil.
Was too funny hahahaha. I love Waverly but what the hell did they do? Great update!
Author's Response: Grace has not forgotten her roots! Jared is funny. He is trying to be good, but that bad boy always finds a way out. Thanks so much for the feedback. Reviewer: greatodinsraven Signed
[Report This]Date: 21/08/08 07:15 pm
Wow so can I just say first of all, in light of the whole John Edwards thing, reading this is a whole new light right now hahahaha. I see Jared has got Payton all off her game, but she's still not going to make it any easier for him I have a feeling. I liked seeing things from Payton's perspective it definitely brings som vulnerability to her.
Author's Response:
Hi! You have got Payton down to a T. She is definitely off her game, but she is not going to make it easy for him. She does feel vulnerable and that is not a comfortable place for her.
When I was writing this and the John Edwards scandal broke, I thought how ironic is that!
Reviewer: greatodinsraven Signed [Report This]Date: 21/08/08 07:08 pm