Oooh! I see you dropping hints of nothing good! What do Waverly and Brett (BTW- Awesome names) have up their sleeves and who is Grace calling for consolation? Very interesting indeed. Great update! :)
Author's Response: In politics you know everyone is up to something and it is usually nothing good!
[Report This]Date: 13/08/08 04:15 am
hmmmmmm......very interesting :) Curious to see what all is going one with everyone.
Author's Response:
Hi JC, it gets curiouser and curiouser....I hope you enjoy the next update coming soon. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: jcdeppfan87 Signed
[Report This]Date: 13/08/08 01:42 am
Hee Hee, I had to giggle over these descriptions, so appropriate...
'Parasite Hilton, Lindsay Blowan or Kim Assdarsian'
Seems like there are lots of juicy secrets to come.
And Grace is intriguing, I've always wondered what politicians' wives are really thinking when these sex scandals blow up.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review Shocol. It is so ironic what is going on with John Edwards admitting to an affair I think about his wife and what she is going through. There is a long history between Ethan and Grace that you will get to understand why she stood there. I hope you enjoy my next update. Reviewer: shocol Signed
[Report This]Date: 12/08/08 08:12 pm
This is great so far. I really love how you captured the energy of being in the political game. Everything feels rushed and high pressure, just like how it really is in D.C.! I like payton she seems like a genuine butt kicker. Grace scares me, I wonder what she's got up her sleeve.
Author's Response: Thank you! I am glad you are enjoying it. I have worked in politics and they can be drama queens! Everything is an emergency :) I like Payton too...she likes to appear strong, but is really just learning to walk in that strength. Thank for your review.
[Report This]Date: 12/08/08 08:01 pm
The juicy secrets and lies, I love life on Capitol Hill!!!!
I can't wait to see who Grace called, it has to be some SUPER SEXY ex-lover. OH, and what secret does Waverly and Brett have going.
Author's Response: Thank you! I am so glad you are enjoying it. Hopefully, it is unfolding in a way that makes you keep coming back! I love a good suspense story. Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed
[Report This]Date: 12/08/08 03:33 am
Hmmm...does Cameron know Payton?
About time a woman didn't make it so easy for Mr. Marcel. That's it Payton, keep'em guessing. Men like a little chase.
I've always felt such empathy for women in the public eye who have been embarrassed and humiliated by their partners. Grace may end up being a royal b*tch, but right now I feel sorry for her.
Looking forward to your next update.
Author's Response: I love characters that are complicated. They have that gray area, they are not completely bad or good. Thanks for your review, I hope you enjoy the next update. Reviewer: lovemboth Signed
[Report This]Date: 12/08/08 03:26 am
This just gets more and more mysterious. I'm wondering who Grace called, she seems a bit on the edge. And a deal with the devil, wonder what that's all about.
Author's Response: Hi TBG, There is a lot to Grace. She is a complex woman. Thanks for the review...I hope you keep reading. Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed
[Report This]Date: 11/08/08 05:02 am
Poor Jared worked hard and he didn't even get her name. That's cold.
I like Grace already. Ethan's gonna pay for his actions when he gets home.
Author's Response:
Jared is getting what people call 'Karma' :~)
There is a lot to Grace that I am looking forward to bringing out.
I hope you enjoy the next update. Thanks for your review.
Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed [Report This]Date: 09/08/08 05:18 am
Okay, so Jared is obviously sprung. Ethan is pretty hard core and I love it. I'm thinking Grace has a few tricks up her sleeve as well. Nice chapter Harlen. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thanks so much Black Mamba, Ethan is turning out to be one of my favorite characters. As they so it is so good being bad. You are definitely right about Grace. I plan on going deeper into Grace and Ethan's relationship. Thanks so much for you review. I hope you like the next update.
[Report This]Date: 09/08/08 02:58 am
Great update! :) I'm interested to see the plot thicken and unfold. ;)
Author's Response: Thank you Madame Z, I am coming up with some twist and turns, that hopefully with keep you interested. I read the summary of Wanderland. It sounds really good. I can't wait to read it. Thanks for your review.
[Report This]Date: 08/08/08 09:46 pm
First... this is the best line ever...
I guess partying with Puffy Duffy or P Titty or Puff Poppa…whatever that 40 year old teenager is calling himself these days has started to rub off on you.”
There really isn't a better description for Puff (I refuse to call him Diddy)
Loved the interaction between Payton and Jared. Can't wait to see this unfold. Mrs. Michaels is a mad black woman... and I can't say I blame her. I'm curious to see her relationship with her philandering husband and what they will do to keep his seat in the Senate. Awesome Update Harlen!
Author's Response:
You discovered one of my favorite sayings about him! I am glad you enjoyed the interaction btwn Jared and Payton. She is not going to make it easy for him. You will get to see more interaction btwn Ethan and Grace. I want to bring out the layers of their relationship that have bought them to this point. I am so glad you enjoyed it. That is a big honor coming from you, being as though I am 'He's with Who?' number 1 fan!
Reviewer: idjunkie Anonymous [Report This]Date: 08/08/08 07:25 pm
Oh, I like Ethan. He's mean and nasty...:)
And the interplay between Jared and Payton was nice, though I think she has him pegged down to a tee. Seems a little full of himself at the moment.
Great chapter, looking forward to more..
Author's Response:
Thanks TBG, I love writing Ethan. He gets to say what he wants and no one seems to be able to stop him! Jared has never been accused of being insecure, but Payton will have a lot to do with that. Thank you for the feedback...please keep it coming.
Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Anonymous [Report This]Date: 08/08/08 06:03 pm
This seems very promising. Great start and I can't wait for a update!
And shout-out to the MAC LipGlass, that stuff is the BEST!
Author's Response: Thank you! I am so glad you enjoyed it. I was a little worried about how it starts off, but it will definitely keep moving. Yes...nothing beats lipglass! Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed
[Report This]Date: 08/08/08 12:16 am
Interesting start. You set the characters up nicely. The scandel at the end got me interested in what's next. Update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you for your review and welcoming me to the chamber. I hope you enjoy the next chapter. There will definitely be more surprises waiting for you. I promise to update soon.
[Report This]Date: 07/08/08 11:30 pm
I love it! Christian Bale? *salivates* Look forward to more! :)
Author's Response: Christian Bale does have a tendancy to make one drool...I have been a fan of his for years. Since the releas of the Dark Knight it has just fueled my addiction!
[Report This]Date: 07/08/08 09:17 pm
Welcome to the Chamber! Great story premsis sounds good!!
Author's Response:
Thanks Minx, I really appreciate your response.
Reviewer: Minx Anonymous [Report This]Date: 07/08/08 09:14 pm
Wow, I haven't gotten to the story but as of right now I am totally hooked, the cast is awesome, the premise is great and the summaries are intriguing. Can't wait to read!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I really enjoyed choosing the cast. I can really see each one of them taking on this role. I hope you enjoy the next chapter!
Reviewer: greatodinsraven Signed [Report This]Date: 07/08/08 09:14 pm
Alright, I'm intrigued.
Peyton is very cute, talking to her dog. And Jared is already sprung, can't wait to see more from these two.
I'm excited about this story, great first chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for all of your help, and kind words. I am so glad you liked the first chapter. There is a lot more to come for Payton and Jared. Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed
[Report This]Date: 07/08/08 09:13 pm
Read the summary and I love it! I'm ready for more!
Author's Response: Thank you! I am so nervous and excited at the same time. I really hope you enjoy it. Let me know what you think. Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/08/08 08:53 pm