they have alot things they both need to work out i hope they still take that trip maybe thats what they need please update soon ps is this how all the chapters are going to be with song lyrics in between?
Author's Response: Yes, Jared and Payton will work it out. These 2 chapters are song fics. The new chapters will be the same as before.
[Report This]Date: 17/09/08 08:28 pm
omg i thought payton was smarter then that it is so ovious that that was a setup payton needs to open her eyes and get a clue about who really cares for her and stop putting up a walls in her relashionships
Author's Response: Payton has had these walls for a long time...it takes time and a good man to get past them. Jared is just the man for the job.
[Report This]Date: 17/09/08 08:24 pm
Payton needs too see that love is not easy and that there will be bumps in the road.
Ming is a pathetic, desperate troll that needs to come up missing.
Author's Response:
Hi LL, You are right...Payton is going to get there...and it is fun watching Jared work that magic! Ming doesn't have a chance.
Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 17/09/08 08:05 pm
Ming is a typicall B, wants to make more out of it than it really was. Payton needs reassurance from her man. Good read.
Author's Response: Hi Avis, Ming's ego is definitely bruised. Thanks for the compliment.
[Report This]Date: 14/09/08 06:02 pm
I love the way Waverly and Peyton put Ming in her place. This woman is to desperate and it's just SAD!!!
Author's Response: Hi Sweet Pea! Ming is desperate and loves to play childish games.
[Report This]Date: 14/09/08 12:24 am
Good for Payton, Ming needed a Smackdown.. Ming is just mad b/c Jared treated her like the Joke that she is, its not his fault you are miserable, check out a Mirror.
I hope that Payton doesn't let Ming ruin what could be something good with Jared.
Author's Response: Hi LL, Ming is very full of herself, Jared doesn't feed into her games. That's all she was to him. Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 13/09/08 06:08 am
Brett and Cameron are adorable. I still love Wave! She's the shiznit! Whoa... Ming needs to sit her flat ass down and kudos to Payton for handling her. What a beyotch! I admitedly see Ming as that Red Oyster chick from the first Flavor of Love (I know, I know... it's shameful to even admit that I watched that show) but that's how I picture Ming.
Great update Harlen! :)
BTW- Waverly + Ellis = Comedy!!!
Author's Response:
Hi IDJ, Ok so I have Cheaters and you have Flavor of Love! Jared treated Ming as he saw her...a joke.
Reviewer: idjunkie Anonymous [Report This]Date: 13/09/08 12:59 am
payton please go off on her i couldnt wait to see this side of her dont fall for that bicth plan great update please update soon
Author's Response: Hi Ellen, thanks so much. Payton does have another side to her. I will be updating soon. Reviewer: ellenangel69 Signed
[Report This]Date: 12/09/08 11:00 pm
a trip sounds like a great idea to get them away from everything and this new chick can fall back
Author's Response: Hi Ellen, the trip is going to be great for all of them...they will all be closer.
Date: 12/09/08 10:54 pm
Great update! Ming sounds like trouble.
Author's Response:
Hi Hopieland, Thanks for the compliment. Trouble is Ming's middle name!
Reviewer: Hopieland Anonymous [Report This]Date: 12/09/08 07:56 pm
WTF! I have to know the backstory to the pictures of Brett! Talk about career killer!
I was wondering when one of Jared's old girlfriends/sex buddies was going to turn up!
Author's Response: Hi Sweet Pea, Brett has a lot to loose. You know I am going to give a backstory...I think while on vacay might be nice. Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed
[Report This]Date: 11/09/08 04:33 am
Is Jared dumb? Letting Ming go back upstairs by herself. That girl is up to something. Great update. I am really enjoying this story. You should post it on the sweetest taboo. That ladies there would lap it up.
Author's Response: Hi Luciangirl, You know men...if it were a woman it would have been totally different. The funny thing is that this part is a true story. I just got cleared for TST...you will see it there soon. Thanks for looking out! I am glad you are enjoying it.
Date: 11/09/08 02:41 am
UGH. Thanks for the update, but I'm not liking what is going on. LOL
Author's Response: Hi JCDeppfan, I will be updating soon.. <;~)
[Report This]Date: 11/09/08 02:02 am
This chapter was hilarious! This in particular:
“You have everything to do with that…and that onion ass of yours.”
“Onion?”
“Yes, the sight of it brings tears to my eyes.”
“You are so corny!” Payton laughed.
And this:
“Working out my ass...and not on a treadmill for sure. You were working it out on somebody about 6’2” with brown hair and hazel eyes named Jared.”
I just love Waverly! Poor Brett. What on Earth are they gonna do about the blackmailer? I kinda want her to go ahead and tell Cameron. Rather it come from her than some publication.
Ming needs to walk it out... back to Manhattan! I hope she doesn't cause any trouble for Payton and Jared.
Exellent update Harlen!
Author's Response: Hi IDJ...can you imagine Waverly and Ellis together? Reviewer: idjunkie Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 11/09/08 01:23 am
Jared better watch out for Ming, she is one of those spoiled brats who doesn't like to be rejected, I have a feeling she saw his Caller ID
I so hope that Brett come clean with Cameron b4 the blackmailer sends him the picks.
Author's Response: Hi LL, You have Ming down to a T. Brett underestimates Cameron's love for her. I will update soon. Thanks for your feedback. Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 10/09/08 11:59 pm
she can go back wherever she came from and leave jared alone but i love the ides of them going on a trip together please update soon
Author's Response:
Jared handled her pretty well, I think. The trip is going to be fun. I will be updating soon.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 10/09/08 10:02 pm
Dude, Ethan is such a great character, I love how you write him. I understand Gavin's conflict, but I'm on the fence about him and Grace. I like them together, but to steal your best friend's wife? After he spills his guts about his troubled marriage? That's a bit cold blooded.
But I do love complicated characters, so I'm gonna sit back and watch what happens. Excellent chapter Harlen!
Author's Response: HI TBG, Ethan is complicated. It took this to make him stop and look at himself. Gavin wants what he wants. So we shall see what Grace is willing to sacrifice to stay or stray. Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed
[Report This]Date: 09/09/08 06:35 pm
hott chapter i love P/J together it seems jared is falling hard for payton
update soon
Author's Response:
What is the saying the bigger they are the harder they fall. <;~)
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 09/09/08 11:44 am
Hot! Please update asap I'm in love with this story!
Author's Response: Hi Hopieland, Thanks! I will be updating soon. I am glad you are enjoying it.
Date: 09/09/08 08:08 am
Very nice chapter. Nice job on the love scene, very well done.
I"m really torn on this whole Ethan and Gavin thing. Ethan is obviously a crappy husband, that much is certain. And the affairs thing is jut a deal breaker for me. But I do think he's sincere in wanting to fix his marriage, however if Grace left him I think it would be what he deserved.
On the other hand, not really feeling Gavin right now as the other option. Even though he loves Grace, that invitation to the lake just struck me as manipulative and underhanded. He knows how he feels about her, he calls Ethan his best friend, lets the man pour his heart out about his marriage (including that no sex tidbit) and then justifies it all because he thinks he knows what's best?
I'm starting to think Grace would be better off on her own.
Great job Harlen.
Author's Response:
Hi BlackMamba, Both men are opposites of the same coin...they just go about it differently. They both want what they want. Whether its power or Grace. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed [Report This]Date: 09/09/08 06:09 am
Woo hoo! It's time for Payton to start lying to Brett and Waverly. lol
Jared better not break Payton's heart. It's hard enough on her to let go and let flow. She's trying though.
What a quandary Gavin is in. In love with his best friend's wife.
Looking forward to the next update!
Author's Response:
Hi Lovemboth, You are too funny! I love it let go and let flow....Payton is trying. Jared is serious. He is not the one to worry about.
Gavin is in the proverbial rock and hard place. He is trying to be good, but it's hard. I will be updating soon. I think you will like the next chapter. Talk to you then.
Reviewer: lovemboth Signed [Report This]Date: 09/09/08 03:54 am
I love them together! I really hope she's not going to be the one to mess this up but I have a feeling she will be. :o(
Let it go Payton!!!
Author's Response: Hi JCDeppFan, Payton is trying, this is definitely new territory for her and for Jared. We will see who handles it better. We shall see... Reviewer: jcdeppfan87 Signed
[Report This]Date: 09/09/08 03:50 am
Um, Peyton and Jared are so HOT!!! Their love scene was just lovely but I'm afraid she's gonna push him away, isn't she? Peyton, let that man love you!!!
You know how I feel about Ethan, but at least he's trying (I think) to make it right! I still LOVE me some Gavin and what a bad predictament he's in! He loves Grace but he's been friends with Ethan for so long... what's a man to do? GREAT update Harlen! :)
Author's Response:
Hi IDJunkie, thanks so much. Payton is trying to live a little. She really is going to learn to trust.
Gavin is definitely in a tight spot. He knows Grace in ways Ethan doesn't, so he sees her different than Ethan. He also has Waverly to deal with...the fall out could be big...is it worth it? We'll see....What's a man to do?
Reviewer: idjunkie Anonymous [Report This]Date: 08/09/08 10:17 pm
I loved that Peyton realized that she'd made love for the first time and it was more than just sex.
It is so hard for me to feel sorry for Ethan, and I don't! He has had years to make it up to Grace, but it took him getting caught in the limelight to realize how much she means to him. Whereas, Gavin has always treated her with respect.
Author's Response:
Hi Sweet Pea, Yes there is a big difference and Payton realized it for the first time, which is even scarier for her. She will learn to trust. What is the saying? You don't know what you got till it's gone? That defines Ethan....but Gavin has known for a long time. It is not easy being in love with someone that is unavailable...on top of the fall out with his daughter and best friend....does he think Grace is worth it...we'll see!
Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed [Report This]Date: 08/09/08 09:10 pm
That was a romantic chapter, Peyton and Jared are really into eachother.
I have a feeling that Bree is about to lose that bet.
Author's Response: Hi Lady Liberty, Thanks for the compliment...just between us. I have a feeling you are right. I hope you enjoy the next chapter. Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 06/09/08 03:50 pm