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Title: Chapter 6

Poor Jude is loosing his mind when he's close to Sammy.

Love the characters interactions so far in it.

Reviewer: Insomniac Sioj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/11/11 08:52 am

Title: Chapter 6

I'm looking forward to Jude and Samara's weekend getaway.

I'm happy that Jude has decided to grant Noah last wish. I think it will be good for them both, the ultimate bond.

 



Author's Response: Thank you for reading and the getaway should be fun.

Reviewer: Cholyn Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/11/10 03:57 am

Title: Chapter 6

Can't believe I almost missed this update.  You're a great writer.  The pace of the story is just right and the interaction between Samara and Jude is nice.  You can see them falling in love.  I am wondering how Noah will feel even though he set this in motion or at least gave his consent.  Looking forward to more and the beach trip.

Author's Response: Thank you for the compiment. I am trying to keep the pacing as realistic as possible so thank you for noticing. And you are right, your mouth can say anything but it's your actions that truly dictate your feelings; so we'll have to see just how sincere Noah is.

Reviewer: qualidee3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/11/10 05:23 am

Title: Chapter 6

So I was trying to think if there was anything that I wanted to add to my other review and the only thing I can think of is how much I love this story. I love the premise, I love the characters (maybe not Noah as much as the others), and I love the really long updates. So much to think about.

And whenever you are ready to post another update, you just go right ahead.

 

Like now. 



Author's Response: Thank you!!! I appreciate the feedback and chapter seven is up. So please tell me what you think.

Reviewer: Onimosity Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/11/10 09:04 pm

Title: Chapter 6

Damn! - I love this story so much, feeling so greedy, so update SOON PRETTY PLEASE!

Author's Response: I appreciate you following this story. Next chapter is ready :-).

Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/11/10 01:29 am

Title: Chapter 6

I know this may be wrong, but part of me wants Samara to be with Jude.  AFTER Noah passes away. They are already are developing feelings for one another.  Hopefully they will also have a child together.  It is wrong of me to want them to be a couple? You have written this story so brilliantly that I fine myself having emotions over the characters.  THANKYOU, for continuing the story again.

I just feel that Jude has suffered so much at a young age.  He feels as if he can not have intercourse the normal way, needs to be in a force environment.  I know that Samara will teach him how to be a gentle lover.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for kind words. The reviews really help me to keep going. And you are not wrong for wanting two people who seem to care for each other, to explore a relationship when they are ready.

And you are not alone, I too find that I have emotions for the characters and it often makes the story real in my eyes and not fantastical or unbelievable. Keep reading and tell me what you think about the next chapter.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/11/10 07:51 pm

Title: Chapter 6

This story has so much depth and emotion.  I feel as if I am there with them.  I laugh, cry and feel hurt along with Noah, and Jude.  I was at work reading this story today. THANY you for continuing the story.  You are a really good writer.  MORE PLEASE

Author's Response: Thank you! That is exactly what I want to hear. I can't tell you how many times I've read a book and felt nothing about the story or for the characters. When I read, it is for escapism, I want to be there , to see and feel the things they do. Keep reading, I appreciate the feedback.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/11/10 07:02 pm

Title: Chapter 6

If you didn't have me before, you really got me now.

I like the way you make me feel the characters emotions, all of them are torn in different directions because of Noah's illness.

They all want to do what's right but they don't want to hurt anyone. Unfortunately in a situation like this it is inevitable and we can only hope that before Noah dies they all make their peace so that the survivors can move on.

Love the pics, I saw them and smiled they would have made a beautiful couple riding off into the sunset together in their Healey, a scarf around her hair so it wouldn't blow in the wind and his arm about her shoulder.

Sigh



Author's Response:

Thank you for the support! Who knew that one little favor would snowball into this? They are all very brave, facing all of these issues and wanting the best for everyone.

Reviewer: Junebug66 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/11/10 06:46 pm

Title: Chapter 6

I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!

PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE I AM BEGGING For the next chapter already. Did I say please?



Author's Response: Thank you for reading. Next chapter is up. Please tell me what you think.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading. Next chapter is up. Please tell me what you think.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/11/10 04:18 pm

Title: Chapter 6

You almost made me late for work today (shame on you) that’s just how good this story was. Every emotion you could think of played a part in this story. I really did enjoy it you did an excellent job. BTW you do know your cars lol

Author's Response: Thank you and I hope that you made it in on time. LOL I actually got hooked on the cars recently I've been attending classic car shows like crazy now; my husband finds it amusing.

Reviewer: JJ Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/11/10 03:00 pm

Title: Chapter 6

Loved it!!!! Now i need more ;-)

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/11/10 02:00 pm

Title: Chapter 6

That was absolutely fabulous!  Love this story.  I bow to your greatness.  I can't wait for the next chapter. 

Author's Response:

:-) I am glad that you liked this chapter. Next chap is up.

Reviewer: Romance Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/11/10 08:35 am

Title: Chapter 6

Hmmm, Mari and Jude seem to be growing on each other now. Interesting update.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/11/10 07:32 am

Title: Chapter 6

So I will write a real review tomorrow when I am not laying in bed reading on my phone but I had to tell you right now that I loved it. You have a way with a phrase and beautiful imagery. I love Samara and Jude, their mutual vulnerability and the way they are both kind of starving for love and physical affection. But i'll talk about them nope later. Right now I want to talk about Noah. I know he is dying but his thinking seems so simplistic and selfish. If if does this for his brother and his wife then the awful things he's done don't matter. And if's done some bad things. Letting his brother go to jail for him, refusing chemo...Noah seems to be blind to the consequences of his own actions on some levels. And he stood up his wife. It will be interesting to see how he delp when/if jude and samara do make love. I have more thoughts but am literally typing this on my phone so will comment again later but very well done.

Reviewer: Onimosity Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/11/10 06:58 am

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