I am enjoying this story I so want to find out what happened with Frank and Rachel and how it became Rachel and James instead of Rachel and Frank. Can't wait til the next update.
Thank you
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review; I REALLY appriciate it!
Chel
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed
[Report This]Date: 25/11/10 03:57 pm
Great story! I can't wait for more :)
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Thank you for the review; I REALLY appriciate it!
Chel
Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed [Report This]Date: 25/11/10 03:25 pm
That was heart wrenching. Great start...I started reading this story after I found M&M Smith and saw your authors notes for the last update so to speak.
I look forward to reading more on this story as well.
Thank you.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like the stories.
Unfortantely, it's going to get a little worse for them before it's get better. . .
Thank you for the review; I REALLY appriciate it!
Chel
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed
[Report This]Date: 25/11/10 11:59 am
Loving this story so far!! What's the deal with Rachel and Frank??? WHy didn't they marry??? They seem to be soulmates. Please give us more!
Author's Response:
Yes they are soulmates, but sometimes you gotta go through the beasties before you get to royality lol
Thank you for the review; I REALLY appriciate it!
Chel
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed
[Report This]Date: 25/11/10 06:50 am
it so cute how the threw the weapon at him wanted to kill M lol but glad the grandma helping them along the way to be together. I like how he bought her flowers and acting like a teen when he seen her in the outfit lol. i don't like coco either thanks for the updated.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review; I REALLY appriciate it!
Chel
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed
[Report This]Date: 24/11/10 10:30 am
nice pic of the cast. thanks for the updated.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review; I REALLY appriciate it!
Chel
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed
[Report This]Date: 27/09/10 10:19 pm
what happen to her did someone drug her or shot at her? it good think that frank is there to make sure she saty safe for her daughters. thanks for the updated.
Author's Response:
Hoped you had a very good Thanksgiving!
Frank would lay down his life for Rachel
Thank you for the review; I REALLY appriciate it!
Chel
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed
[Report This]Date: 27/09/10 10:18 pm
omg poor rachel to lose her husband in such and cruel way very sad. who wanted to kill her husband? hope frank can be there for her and her daughters. thanks for the updated.
Author's Response:
Hoped you had a very good Thanksgiving!
Yes, Frank will be there for her in more ways than one. . .
Thank you for the review; I REALLY appriciate it!
Chel
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed
[Report This]Date: 27/09/10 10:16 pm
Girl this is toooooooo HHHHHHHHHHOOOOOOOTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!! Now I know you aren't just going to tease me with a few chapters after riling me up with this sexy banner. I know you ain't that trifling woman. Don't make me hurt you!
Author's Response:
Please don't hurt me lol. I fumbled with the banner until I got it. I'm glad it turned out looking ok.
I'm finally finishing up the next two chapters of Mr and Mrs Smith and I'm going to try to work on It Happened One Night and the Bodyguard this weekend.
Thank you for reading, reviewing and giving me encouragement when I need it. I REALLY appriciate it!
Chel
Reviewer: Junebug66 Signed [Report This]Date: 22/09/10 01:50 pm
Chel, I really hate you! I said I wasn't going to do it and you sucked me in damn it! I started out by looking at the cast and you know you had me at that first pic right? After that I read the first chapter and as much as I've never watched the entire movie I think I might have to watch The Bodyguard the next time it comes on. You are an evil woman. Now I know you are trying to get this out so you can get back to M&MS and IHON but watch the grammar girl! Not enough to stop my flow but you know it would hang some people up. I will beta for you if you need. So far I do like it and would like very much to see where it goes.
Author's Response:
Hi Girl!
Don't hate me; I CAN NOT resist using Dave anyway I can get!
YES, I would LOVE for you to beta this if you have the time!
Waiting on Taste of Honey and Island Interlude!
Thank you for the review; I REALLY appriciate it!
Chel
Reviewer: Junebug66 Signed [Report This]Date: 20/09/10 05:59 am
excited for this story. can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
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chel
Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed [Report This]Date: 20/09/10 02:50 am
wow
how shot rachael and why?
is frank in love with rachael?
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review; I REALLY appriciate it!
chel
Reviewer: nikki Anonymous [Report This]Date: 20/09/10 02:08 am
good start
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chel
Reviewer: nikki Anonymous [Report This]Date: 20/09/10 02:06 am
I gotta a feeling i'm gonna like this
beautiful pictures
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chel
Reviewer: nikki Anonymous [Report This]Date: 20/09/10 02:05 am
O.K.!!! More of Dave, Yippee !!! We cannot have enough of him, Thank you
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review; I REALLY appriciate it!
chel
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review; I REALLY appriciate it!
chel
Reviewer: cimmy1 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 20/09/10 01:17 am
Me likey!!! Can't wait to read more.
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chel
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 19/09/10 09:35 am
I am think that I am going to love this story. I am loving Frank already, is he a wrestler? He looks alright but his body says damn!!!
Author's Response:
Yeah, Frank is protrayed by Dave Batista. I wanted a different look for Frank. I think that Dave is FINE, but I can see how he could be viewed as unconventionally looking to others.
Thank you for the review; I REALLY appriciate it!
chel
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 19/09/10 05:58 am
Great cast. Thanks
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chel
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: 19/09/10 05:48 am
My goodness, I can't believe that someone shot her while she was singing. Thanks
Author's Response:
It will all become clearer as time goes on.
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chel
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: 19/09/10 05:47 am
Great start to the story. Sorry to read that you deleted the original.
Author's Response:
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chel
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: 19/09/10 05:45 am