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Title: Chapter 14

This is so sad but I'm glad u made a sequeal to the original one.  Tyler loves Keisha in a sick, demented way.  I hope Will and Keisha are able to ge together.  I also hope that Keisha doesn't let Tyler into her mind by him saying she was just like him.  What happened to Tyler to make him the kind of man he is now?  Will there be help for him?  Will he attempt another prison break and find Keisha again OMG what will happen next?

Kim

Reviewer: kimyso Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/05/13 02:19 am

Title: Chapter 14

wow! i wonder how she's going to get through it this time.

Reviewer: IRJunkie Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/09/11 12:18 am

Title: Chapter 14

I so glad that Keisha was able to free herself and free Will.  Please tell that Taylor dies from his injuries.  THe girl can't handle much more and I want to go with her feelings for Will.  He's good for her.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/04/11 01:20 am

Title: Chapter 14

Wonderful story, update please.

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/03/11 04:45 am

Title: Chapter 14

I just discover this story, Excellent........................

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/02/11 06:14 pm

Title: Chapter 14

OMG!!! This story was the shiznic....You have another coming after this one right.  That ending had me on the edge of my seat and Julie's promise that Tyler would get the death penalty and a speedy one.  I wonder if they took him back to the same prison he was in before since he knows the escape routes or was that all Mack.

Tyler is one sick cookie and he survived all those stabs and still lived though in critical condition.

Thanks for sharing yoru imagination this could be a movie.  Better the some of the others I've seen of this genre.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/11/10 11:54 pm

Title: Chapter 14

Umm...Come on, Seriously? REALLY?? *smh* 

Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/11/10 10:52 pm

Title: Chapter 13

I am so happy he's dead

Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/11/10 10:45 pm

Title: Chapter 14

Noooooo.......

It can't end like this!

 more please!

There are so many unanswered questions.

You have to write a third part. please.

I love a good thriller.

thank you :)

 

 

Reviewer: Shanee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/11/10 10:45 pm

Title: Chapter 14

Dying and still talking crazy, Tyler is certifiable.

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/11/10 06:07 am

Title: Chapter 14

Glad they got away in the end but I needed more for closure. Hmmm, maybe we'll get another story. Yay!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/11/10 04:45 am

Title: Chapter 13

I really hope you won't take this the wrong way, but I really did not understand the point of this story. I really like the first story, but this one was like, I don't know. Nothing really excited happened in it. Just torturing the whole time and it was like getting old and a little boring. There wasn't much drama. Just Tyler speaking stupid things and stabbing with a spike. You didn't reveal anything about why Tyler like to torture people and you make Will seems like he is stupid or something. I was really excited for this sequel, but i expected a little more. The first one was way better.

Reviewer: Anon Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/11/10 04:39 am

Title: Chapter 14

Tyler is tough dough who refuses to die, lol! Thank you for Unresolved! I'm glad both Keisha & Will got out of there!

Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/11/10 11:19 am

Title: Chapter 13

If Keisha kills Tyler she will be giving him what he wants. I can understand her anger, but she is better than that.  He wants her to be like him a killer, please do not allow that to happen. Time for the police to come to the rescue. Now Jade need to die and I was pleased Tyler was the one who killed her. You are a great writer, thank you. Is there some type of feeling between Will and Keisha?  Was Will just waitnig until Keisha was ready for a relationship?  It would be nice if he help in the rescue. Be her knight in armor type of thing.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/11/10 06:42 am

Title: Chapter 13

Oh man, Jade got what she deserved! Yay!!! I don't like the fact the Keisha has become violent. She needs to go to a phone and call for help! I hope she doesn't peg him in the throat.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/11/10 05:59 am

Title: Chapter 13

Okay I am going to say this. Please don’t hold it against me.

I almost feel sorry for Tyler.. I know. He loves Keisha but he hurts her physically and mentally. I was hoping at one point the would have gotten rid of Will (set him free), not kill him. Then tried to make it up to Keisha. There have been case when the kidnapped falls in love with the kidnapper. Not sure what the correct name is. I know I sounds crazy but it was wishful thinking. Thanks for a terrific update. Earlier I wanted it to end now I am sad that it its almost over. You really are talented. Thank you again for taking the time and energy to write and share your story.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/11/10 05:51 am

Title: Chapter 13

WOW!!!!!

I am not sure of what else to say. THANK YOU

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/11/10 05:32 am

Title: Chapter 12

That was a great update and I am nglad to see Keisha get some fight in her.  Tyler is crazy son of a biscuit!!!  I am so glad that he kill Jade but I wanted Keisha to kill Jade.

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/11/10 02:57 am

Title: Chapter 12

Tyler is messed up. I think in some twisted way he really is in love with Keisha. Well, not real love, but his twisted version of love. I would actually like to here Crazy's story.

Reviewer: Cholyn Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/11/10 02:47 am

Title: Chapter 12

Waiting for the next update

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01/11/10 02:09 am

Title: Chapter 12

You are taking a good story and turning it bad. You have all the components to make it great. Please stop dragging it out. Tyler and Jade are crazy. They get off on pain and humiliating others. We your readers get that. How much pain and suffering does Keisha have to endure? She had an abortion after the first rape and torturing at Tyler’s hand. You are making Will appear less of a man. He is bound and uable to help himself or his friend. Please this is not meant to be judgmental or critical. I really loved the first story. Was happy to see that you did are part II. It is just time to end it.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/11/10 02:04 am

Title: Chapter 12

SERIUOSLY!!!

How are you going to leave us wondering what happened next. It’s Halloween we waited to see who was going to die and how they are going to get away from the crazies. Please update again soon .

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/11/10 01:54 am

Title: Chapter 11

*sigh*. This story had so much potential but then Jade and Will came into the picture... Too bad.

Reviewer: Anne Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 31/10/10 02:20 pm

Title: Chapter 11

Oh hell no, what now??? Can he not become unconscious, seriously injured or die?? That sick slut he has with him raping Will needs to die soon too!!!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/10/10 07:54 am

Title: Cast pics

okay... if Tyler knows that the police are on his trail....why has he not moved to a new location?  Please allow Jade and Tyler to be punished.  I was hoping she stake him in the eye as he turned around.  MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/10/10 01:21 am

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