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Title: Chapter 1: Here to Stay

I hope Tara will explain herself to Sam the next time they meet. He tries so hard. Poor guy, after that, he needed a hug. That Miss Thelma deserved to be told off. The nerve of her, pretending to be nice. That one is trouble waiting to happen.

Reviewer: FatJan Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/11/10 02:08 pm

Title: Chapter 8: A Real Family

Aww.. I thought Tara was having fun, it was nice that even she wanted them to have more family outing.. I can't stand Miss Thelma, that bitch is evil.. LOL!! Great job!!! Please update soon :)

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/11/10 12:54 pm

Title: Chapter 8: A Real Family

Tara is so stupid, but I did love how told that old woman off.  She shouldn't have taken it out on Sam.  The man loves her, and loves Maya!!!   Give him a chance Tara!!!

 

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/11/10 06:20 am

Title: Chapter 7: Lullaby

This was sweet, Tara is being more open and Sam seems to be willing to wait. I hope they both realize something more between them than just sex and a beautiful baby..

 Great JOB!!!! I can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/10/10 08:02 am

Title: Chapter 5: I知 Okay With It

Ohh Sam *smh* LOL, Yeah right!

Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]
Date: 29/10/10 03:57 am

Title: Chapter 7: Lullaby

now that was just a great scene with Sam putting Maya to bed.  I really do hope that Sam plays this smart when it comes to Tara.  She has done a great job at getting her life together and he can not try to take that away from her.

Reviewer: letitia Signed [Report This]
Date: 29/10/10 01:10 am

Title: Chapter 7: Lullaby

Awww sweet Maya is a definitely a daddy's girl

Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 28/10/10 08:39 pm

Title: Chapter 7: Lullaby

Aww, keep trying Sam. I know Tara wants to be independent but it never hurts to have help from someone who cares. Great chapter. I like how the story is moving along.

Reviewer: jjazz59 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/10/10 03:12 pm

Title: Chapter 7: Lullaby

That was totally awesome this story if progressing perfectly.  I love Tara and Sam together,I am so glad that you are writing this story.

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 28/10/10 06:47 am

Title: Chapter 7: Lullaby

Hope things work out the way Sam would like.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/10/10 06:31 am

Title: Chapter 7: Lullaby

That was a cute father/daughter moment and Sam is going to be a good father.  It's just going to take some time to win Tara even though he already has her heart.

Reviewer: Vie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/10/10 05:57 am

Title: Chapter 6: The Wrong Reason

Good for Tara. I like how she is standing up for herself. Why does Sam have to be so macho and try to take over? They can work something out if Sam would be patient. Your fic is really good. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: jjazz59 Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 26/10/10 03:29 pm

Title: Chapter 6: The Wrong Reason

Hmmm, hope Tara doesn't give Sam a hard time. Glad that Maya accepts him.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/10/10 07:44 am

Title: Chapter 6: The Wrong Reason

Well, that went a lot better than I thought it would. I am happy that Sam and Tara are open and that Sam wants to commit to her. But I am kind of sad that Tara doesn't want to commit with him, but I understand what she means by not starting a huge step to cover over a beautiful mess (their baby)

I love the story, I hope Sam and Tara open up and try to be more open to a real healthy loving relationship.. Great JOB!!!! Please post again soon :)

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 26/10/10 07:08 am

Title: Chapter 6: The Wrong Reason

Why didn't  Tara just to Sam I don't love like that to marry you?  Because it would be a lie that's why, Tara woman up and accept that man into your life.  You know that you want Sam!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 26/10/10 06:45 am

Title: Chapter 6: The Wrong Reason

Wow I'm glad tara let him, they can work it out together without marriage.  But I hope she still falls in love and marrys him

Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 26/10/10 05:51 am

Title: Chapter 5: I知 Okay With It

uhoh he done taken over! lol

Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 26/10/10 05:44 am

Title: Chapter 4: Let痴 Talk About This Now

whoa, I hope sam is okay

Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 26/10/10 05:37 am

Title: Chapter 6: The Wrong Reason

I love how mature Tara is being now...she's fought so hard for her independence and sanity...glad she is the voice of reason and she recognizes that there are no quick "fixes" to her and Sam's situation...I like the idea of co-parenting for now...they each love that little girl with all their hearts...but still that is no reason to jump head long into marriage...they need to really get to know each other as individuals...marriage does not guarantee stability especially if there is underlying resentment and in-fighting going on between the parents...they should just keep remember to always put Maya first in all of their decisions...I really love this story because it's so true-to-life and human...glad Sam decided not to keep pushing for marriage...because Tara will just simply push back...can't get over Lettie Mae offering her "services" as a babysitter...is she crazy...that's like letting a thief loose in a bank after business hours...can't wait to see what you come up with next in this intriguing story...thanks so much for the update...

Reviewer: attheritz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/10/10 12:10 am

Title: Chapter 6: The Wrong Reason

You have so made me love Sam and Tara with this story.  I just hope that Sam plays this smart.  He wants 'that' family.  He knows that Tara is so stubborn.  So don't push but be there for both of them and they will see what kind of man he really is.

Reviewer: letitia Signed [Report This]
Date: 25/10/10 11:47 pm

Title: Chapter 5: I知 Okay With It

I love Sam's idea but I'm sure Tara is gonna refuse for now. Hmmm, she may surprise me and actually accept.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/10/10 08:05 am

Title: Chapter 5: I知 Okay With It

I'm so glad you didn't make Sam's reaction to the news of his instant parenthood over-the-top...if I could change one thing about Season 3 was how the writers took a sharp turn to the left with his character...his reaction was 'real'...from the shock, anger, to the fierce protectiveness and love he feels for his little girl...thanks so much for that...and he's right...if Maya is a shifter...then she will need guidance...something Sam was deprived of growing up...and having to fend for himself...I love the cliff-hanger...will she or won't she...I believe it will be Maya who will force her parents to confront their feelings for each other...can't wait to see what happens next...this is getting soooo good...loving this story...please update soon...

Author's Response:

I had a HUGE problem with the writing in Season 3 and not just with how they did Sam. This story is AU, so in my personal canon Sam didn't fire at Tommy, he didn't beat Calvin Norris to a blood pulp, and he didn't shoot a man to death in cold blood.

Thanks for your kind words on the story, more to come soon!

Reviewer: attheritz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/10/10 01:07 am

Title: Chapter 5: I知 Okay With It

That's Sam for you. LOL.  Tara was right in thinking he would take over. LOL. 

Can't wait for MORE....

Nyeesha

 

Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/10/10 08:54 pm

Title: Chapter 5: I知 Okay With It

I like the take charge Sam. It will be interesting to see how Tara reacts. 'm glad he is so accepting of Maya plus he cares for Tara. Way to go! I like the suspense!

Reviewer: jjazz59 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/10/10 08:25 pm

Title: Chapter 5: I知 Okay With It

Aww snap!!!  Go head Sam with your bad self.  I can't wait read Tara reaction to Sam's wanting to get married.  Awesome update!!  I am so glad that Sam loves Maya.

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 22/10/10 07:36 pm

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