I'm liking this. I thought the last part was funny. Keep up the good work. I would like to see where you go with this.
Reviewer: Flicker and Sparkle Signed
[Report This]Date: 09/12/10 05:13 pm
well dam i wouldn't mine working in her office to see that sexy ass eye candy all the time mmmmmmmmmmm i like that alot. he should tell his family i think his cousin will understand and be there no matter what. it sucks she has such a bitch for a mother . thanks for the updated.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 09/12/10 12:41 am
liking where the story is heading plz update soon =)
Reviewer: kell369 Signed [Report This]Date: 20/11/10 04:20 am
Sexy Mr. Mateus is in the house! All the ladies say oowwww! Is Alandra gonna put on her big girl panties and avoid temptation or will they be dropping to her ankles with a quickness? I just love a good baby fic. Can't wait for an update.
Reviewer: Junebug66 Signed [Report This]Date: 12/11/10 01:20 pm
Ok I totally missed this chapter..anyway I a so digging Mateus...you describe him so well my imagination has gone willd lol...I can hear the accent and I am more drawn to hinm than our girl!!
I just wonder who baby that is she isw carrying and Julio's name does not come to mind either. Although I really like Alandra and julio's elation ship I think Julio may be doing a little matching making..we will see!
I am digging this story big time sweetie...I can hardly wait for more...I want to know about Mateus though I must say what I have learned so far is a bigg turn on!!
Great job sweetie..I can hardly wait for more!!
Reviewer: neneburge Signed [Report This]Date: 12/11/10 04:27 am
Great start, can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]Date: 10/11/10 10:14 pm
Interesting I am intrigured and ready to get this party started.
So what is the store with Mateus there seem to be more then meets the eye.
How old is Mateus older or younger then Alandra?
Alandra's mother makes me want to pimp slap her trifling ass into next week.
Onward and Upward my dear to the next chapter.
Thanks
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: 10/11/10 05:38 am
Oh...you definitely have me HOOKED on this story. Mateus is hotter than Julio, and that is saying something. LOL. More PLEASE!!
Nyeesha
Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed [Report This]Date: 10/11/10 03:44 am
shoot does she even need julio anymore for his seed, lol.
Reviewer: grumpirah Signed [Report This]Date: 09/11/10 09:26 pm
That was so hot!! the heat between Mateus and Alandra was so smoking and they barely touched.
I can't wait for more.
Reviewer: Janetbd Signed [Report This]Date: 09/11/10 06:41 pm
I hate you for making me like this story...
I can't wait until the fireworks begin :)
Author's Response: I hate myself more, sis. Trust me. SFU is coming my dear. I will type for that and see where It takes me. Reviewer: SebineDareau Signed
[Report This]Date: 09/11/10 04:41 pm
Great update. This story is coming along nicely.
Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed [Report This]Date: 09/11/10 04:02 pm
That was hot, and we haven't gotten to the hot, but naked sex yet!!! I am loving Mateus, he is smoking!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 09/11/10 03:22 pm
Thanks for a great update.
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: 09/11/10 02:54 pm
Haha, loving ithis story! So good - keep them coming!
Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]Date: 09/11/10 11:24 am