Its been a while with this story...I sure would love to see it continue. It captures you from the beginning. Please reconsider writing more of it.
Nyeesha
Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed
[Report This]Date: 29/05/12 02:36 pm
Love the story and I am really interested in how it turns out for Alandra and Matues. Is the introductory text at the begining of each chapter a dream or the future? please, Please, PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: NiaP Anonymous [Report This]Date: 22/08/11 11:34 pm
Okay. It has been a WHILE since the last Update. I liked the way the story was developing. And I miss it. Can we get another Update any time soon?????
Nyeesha
Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed [Report This]Date: 26/02/11 08:57 am
Wow, wonder if they'll complete the deed seeing that the light came back on.
Author's Response: Hmm...I dunno. But naughty things can happen in the light too ;) Hope you're enjoying baha.
[Report This]Date: 16/12/10 07:59 am
No. No. No. How could you stop there!!!. Mateus is just wonderful with Alandra. He may be younger but there is more to him than meets the eye. And I think he is about to show her. LOL. Please update soon.
Nyeesha
Author's Response: I did *evil laugh* Because I knew folks be begging for a continuation :) Mateus is pretty much my dream man; patient, kind, soft spoken, and sexy as all get out. I am on that update right now! Glad you're enjoying Nyeesha! Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed
[Report This]Date: 16/12/10 05:32 am
Oh no you did not stop there missy!! I was ready for tha hawt loving.yeah baby!!
I have to say Alandra is quite a Beotch to Mateus at times..she has so much attitude it can be very unattractive .but he seems to take it all in stride to his credit..he handles her well.
I knew eventually they would end up giving in to the nookie but I am surprised after the lights came on she was still forward..pleasantly surprised at that ..maybe that cold shell has got a little fire under it!!
Great job Nana but leaving us hanging dors nothing but make us beg for more!!
Author's Response: You know, I notice sometimes when I'm going for sassy I turn it into bitch. I don't mean to, I think I reflect a little bit of myself onto her. I'll try to soften her up so she doesn't come off mean. Thanks Ne, glad you like it! Reviewer: neneburge Signed
[Report This]Date: 16/12/10 03:55 am
how you gon' stop there?! smh cruel!
Author's Response: It was pretty easy to stop there actually *evil laugh* I won't leave you hanging for long. Thanks for reading!
Date: 16/12/10 03:52 am
wow i would done the same thing girl. Here is this man take care of you in and out of the job listen to you hold you and make you feel like the most great woman in the world. thanks for the updated.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 16/12/10 12:40 am
oohhh....you are mean! Leaving me wondering what's happening next..
Love it, though, as always.
Reviewer: KKMonroe Signed [Report This]Date: 15/12/10 10:45 pm
I am so glad that you updated and I loved the kiss...even if it was short. It was incredibly sweet. I'm so digging this story.
However I have to ask...why is she so angry all the time? I understand her not wanting her business running rampant around the office but she acts like he did it with malicious intent and he didn't. He was concerned... I'm all for a strong independent woman but sometimes she comes off as if she has a HUGE chip on her shoulder...especially with the people who really care about her. Perhaps that stems from her upbringing with her mom but she should loosen up a bit. Anyway I love Mateus. I think he's absolutely gorgeous...inside and out!
Great job!
Author's Response: I think I project myself onto Alandra a lot of the times when I'm writing her. I try to write sassy and I think it just comes off as mean. The way I wanted her portrayed wasn't mean or bitchy, just not used to trusting anyone other than Julio. A lot of that has to do with her mother; the person you're supposed to trust with your life, she wouldn't trust with a gold fish. I think you'll find that she really starts to open up and calm down in the chapters to come. Thanks for the feedback, ST! Reviewer: SweetTahira Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 15/12/10 07:00 pm
I am hoping that she won't need Julio's swimmers after all. She is attracted to Mateus and we know that he's attracted to her. Her mother is such a 'itch and should be destroyed. Great new chapters thank you for updating. Mateus is HAWT!!!
Author's Response: It's funny, you say that. I wish I could destroy her mother, I based her off of a friend's mom who is pretty much all kinds of crazy loon. She's very manipulative, controlling, and just overall nuts. I wish she were just confined to the darkest corners of my mind, but unfortunately she's walking among us *shutters* I'm glad you're enjoying!
Date: 15/12/10 05:01 pm
Finally they kiss! can't wait for the next chapter for obvious reason *giggles* thanks for the update - loooove this story!
Author's Response: Thank you Cassius! I'm so glad you're enjoying the story :) Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed
[Report This]Date: 15/12/10 03:53 pm