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Title: Public Persona

amazing update! loved it...mind you, that bitch of a mother deserves a painful death!! :)

Reviewer: KKMonroe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/12/10 10:44 pm

Title: Public Persona

HELL YES - an update!!! Thank you so much! Been missing this story and hope to see more XD

Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/12/10 10:43 pm

Title: Gainful Employement

liking where the story is heading plz update soon =)

Reviewer: kell369 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20/11/10 04:20 am

Title: Gainful Employement

Sexy Mr. Mateus is in the house! All the ladies say oowwww! Is Alandra gonna put on her big girl panties and avoid temptation or will they be dropping to her ankles with a quickness? I just love a good baby fic. Can't wait for an update.

Reviewer: Junebug66 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/11/10 01:20 pm

Title: Gainful Employement

Ok I totally missed this chapter..anyway I a so digging Mateus...you describe him so well my imagination has gone willd lol...I can hear the accent and I am more drawn to hinm than our girl!!

I just wonder who baby that is she isw carrying and Julio's name does not come to mind either. Although I really like Alandra and julio's elation ship I think Julio may be doing a little matching making..we will see!

I am digging this story big time sweetie...I can hardly wait for more...I want to know about Mateus though I must say what I have learned so far is a bigg turn on!!

Great job sweetie..I can hardly wait for more!!

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/11/10 04:27 am

Title: Gainful Employement

Great start, can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/11/10 10:14 pm

Title: Gainful Employement

Interesting I am intrigured and ready to get this party started.

So what is the store with Mateus there seem to be more then meets the eye.

How old is Mateus older or younger then Alandra?

Alandra's mother makes me want to pimp slap her trifling ass into next week.

Onward and Upward my dear to the next chapter.

 

Thanks 

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/11/10 05:38 am

Title: Gainful Employement

Oh...you definitely have me HOOKED on this story.  Mateus is hotter than Julio, and that is saying something. LOL. More PLEASE!! 

Nyeesha

Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 10/11/10 03:44 am

Title: Gainful Employement

shoot does she even need julio anymore for his seed, lol.

Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/11/10 09:26 pm

Title: Gainful Employement

That was so hot!! the heat between Mateus and Alandra was so smoking and they barely touched.

I can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Janetbd Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/11/10 06:41 pm

Title: Gainful Employement

I hate you for making me like this story...

I can't wait until the fireworks begin :)



Author's Response: I hate myself more, sis. Trust me. SFU is coming my dear. I will type for that and see where It takes me.

Reviewer: SebineDareau Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/11/10 04:41 pm

Title: Gainful Employement

Great update. This story is coming along nicely.

Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/11/10 04:02 pm

Title: Gainful Employement

That was hot, and we haven't gotten to the hot, but  naked sex yet!!!  I am loving Mateus, he is smoking!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/11/10 03:22 pm

Title: Gainful Employement

Thanks for a great update.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/11/10 02:54 pm

Title: The Beginning

Great start...her secretary quiting the job with a posted note...that was hilarious.  Thanks

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Date: 09/11/10 02:50 pm

Title: Cast of Only Temporary

Great cast.  Thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/11/10 02:43 pm

Title: Gainful Employement

Haha, loving ithis story! So good - keep them coming!

Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/11/10 11:24 am

Title: Cast of Only Temporary

Such a pretty cast...I can't click next to read words...oh my

Reviewer: TheSouthernScribe Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/11/10 06:04 am

Title: Cast of Only Temporary

Ohhhh...I REALLY LIKE THIS!  What a beginning.  I understand Alandra and Julio seems like a really good friend.  But it looks like she is going to get to know his cousin Mateus? 

I hope you will give us more Updates soon.....

Nyeesha

Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 09/11/10 05:11 am

Title: The Beginning

Hmmm, this is gonna be interesting.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/11/10 04:42 am

Title: The Beginning

Oh I am loving this already. Cant wait to see what the cousin brings to the table. I love all of your storys. Look forward to more.

Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/11/10 01:16 am

Title: The Beginning

She's going to fall in love with cousin and have a baby with him as well get married.  I will enjoy the ride!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/11/10 01:16 am

Title: Cast of Only Temporary

Nice cast of characters.

Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/11/10 01:15 am

Title: The Beginning

I'm really liking this story so far.

Maybe after Alandra meets Julio's cousin, she could get him to father her baby.

Reviewer: Janetbd Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/11/10 11:33 pm

Title: The Beginning

TGreat start...I am in love already!! Love Julio and I hope his cousin can melt that cold heart of his boss! I think Julio is trying to play matchmaker but knowing this lady just briefly his cousin better be darn good at melting ice queens becuase his new boss is one heck of one!!

I cannot wait to see how this evolves....I am so excited I could scream!!!

Thankies Na Na you are my jewel!!!

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/11/10 10:17 pm

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