Very nice, I enjoyed this simple delicate tale. Thanks
Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed
[Report This]Date: 05/02/11 10:55 am
I like it. Wish it was a little longer but still sufficent.
Reviewer: AJ Taylor Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 31/01/11 08:45 am
cuteee!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! And thank you reading.
Date: 23/12/10 06:59 am
Oh I love a simple story. Was that a tear I wiped away at the end? Lovely stuff. Keep your laptop in your car, doll if that keeps you writing! (hugs)
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Author's Response: Why thank you darling :) I'm glad you enjoyed it (hugs back) Reviewer: OliviaDuBelle Signed
[Report This]Date: 17/11/10 05:50 pm
That was really good. I liked it. I thought it was really cute too.
Author's Response: Thank you F&S! That was the desired response I was going for. The story is nothing special but it's been a while since I've written a simple love story with no intrigue, mystery, or complications. Just simply love. Glad you enjoyed!
[Report This]Date: 13/11/10 12:11 am
I love this story!!
I once met a good looking dentist and his son while standing in line at WalMart for a whole hour. I was content standing there reading the rags and fuming when he initiated conversation. It can happen. There wasn't a second meeting and I don't know if I would have been as bold and brave as Taryn.
Hmm... I'm torn... I can use my imagination and continue and finish the story OR I can hope that you'll cave under fan pressure and continue it yourself.
Pleezzze? (with a Jamie pout) lol
Author's Response: Sounds like the makings of a story Miss Blue ;) Its weird how things like that can give us inspiration. LOL, I don't think I'll cave under fan pressure. I'm leaving this one as is, unless you'd like to write a second chapter and add to it yourself. I wouldn't mind that one bit :) Thanks for reading, doll! Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed
[Report This]Date: 10/11/10 12:14 pm
So there is more right???? I mean you are to going to continue rught????
Author's Response: That would be a 'no'. Sorry to disappoint but at this time, I'm leaving it up to you to decide what happens with these two. This was my attempt a simple, uncomplicated love story. No strings, just love. I appreciate you reading.
Date: 10/11/10 04:29 am
WOW! That was a great surprise to see another new story posted ! Loved it|!! You are the best, sweetie!! I love characters and I love the plot...wish you would continue! please,..
Author's Response: Thank you, Kaye! I'm so glad you enjoyed the story. Now, all we have to do is get your butt in gear and get you to wrap up DA, and we'll be in shape, haha! A continuation isn't in the works for these two. I'm letting them ride off into the sunset of FictionLand. You can imagine where they go and what they do. The choice is yours!
[Report This]Date: 09/11/10 08:36 pm
Good one shot. Jamie is so cute and more perceptive than the adults!
Author's Response: Children usually are...it's weird. I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
[Report This]Date: 09/11/10 05:35 pm
Me likey.
Author's Response: Me glad, you likey :)
[Report This]Date: 09/11/10 07:24 am
2 stories in 1 day and I'm lovin both. Jamie is adorable and I love how she realized her dad attraction. I waitin to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Aww thank you Q! Children are so much more perceptive than we are sometimes. This one doesn't have a continuation, I'm afraid. I'm leaving it up to you the reader to decide what happens and where they go. I'm really glad you enjoyed the updates though :)
[Report This]Date: 09/11/10 05:41 am