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Title: Chapter 2

I am loving this SO MUCH!!!

Cannot wait to get caught up so I can stalk this story!!!!



Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you are enjoying it! Really appreciate it. :)

Reviewer: femmenoire Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 23/12/10 02:57 pm

Title: Chapter 6

go big daddy

Author's Response: LOL thanks! Glad you're enjoying it!

Reviewer: brownie Signed [Report This]
Date: 22/12/10 06:47 pm

Title: Chapter 6

Glad his family approve and support their relationship.

Author's Response: Yeah, the Inoues are awesome.  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/12/10 05:46 am

Title: Chapter 6

Ok first Shiro with is quiet dignified sexy alpha self is my dream man..he is so smooth with his sexy self he just drops the most beautiful things on Lydia so unexpectedly and blows your darn mind!! What he said about thwie daughter being beautiful the sexiest thing I have heard in awhile..I wanted to eat him up myself!

and him feeding her was panty wetting hawt!! I love how he treats Lydia..perfect!

Shiro's family is wonderful..I love hsi dad an how he demands respect without any effort! I see who Shiro takes after he remains me of his dad...in the way he treats Lydi!!

I love how his family loves her already..and his parents treat her like their real daughter and how his dad wanted to know his intentions with Lydia on a serious note..I loved it!!

So many things about this story I love..I could rattle on forever..it is a awesome story...I love Lydia and Shiro together...they feel like friends!!

Great updt sweetie..great story!!



Author's Response:

Aw, thank you so much! They are a really wonderful family to write. One of my favorites--almost right up there with the McKensies! But considering it's that same universe, that suprises me none.

 And Shiro definitely has some Daddy Shinobu influences! All the sons do, actually.  Next chapter will have more family time so I hope you enjoy!

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/12/10 03:52 am

Title: Chapter 6

Loved it! Please update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading! I appreciate it!

Reviewer: cheetahgrl07 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/12/10 01:49 am

Title: Chapter 6

Great update! Love Shrio's family, and that Lydia is like a daughter to them. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you very much for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)

Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 21/12/10 11:39 pm

Title: Chapter 6

i freaking this family. Can i have kenshin. He's adorable.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading! Adorable is definitely the word to use when describing Kenshin! As for having him...well...#kanyeshrug :p

Reviewer: dee Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/12/10 04:59 pm

Title: Chapter 6

i heart this family especially mom and pop

Author's Response: Thanks! They were fun to write. :)

Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/12/10 04:35 pm

Title: Chapter 6

I love that Shin's parents are crazy about Lydia.  I love how transparent his feelings for Lydia are, I just plain love this story period.

Author's Response: Thank you very much for reading! The Inoues were much fun to write!

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 21/12/10 04:23 pm

Title: Chapter 5

awkward!

Author's Response: Yep, but thanks for reading!

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed [Report This]
Date: 18/12/10 08:29 am

Title: Chapter 5

*re-reads the last sentences* where did that come from? and here i thought Shiro and Lydia were going to get together in the end *deep sigh* thanks for the update nonetheless =)



Author's Response: LOL so did Lydia, until well...but the night's not over! ;)  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/12/10 01:09 pm

Title: Chapter 5

Why is she tripping?  It was a date and the man generally pays.   Shiro is not like any other man, but he is still a man.  A man will of cousrse want some punoni, if you a woman wants to give it him.

Author's Response: She's inexperienced in a lot of ways still, and she's going by what she's done before. But don't worry; Shiro will let her know!

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 15/12/10 05:56 am

Title: Chapter 5

*blinks* Wh...what the hell just happened?

Author's Response: Lydia's independence + Shiro's gentlemanly-ness = stubbornnes all around!

Reviewer: Leo Princess Signed [Report This]
Date: 15/12/10 05:26 am

Title: Chapter 5

I was glad they made it official but what the hell happened toward the end of the date???!! Can they not keep it together???

Author's Response: Thanks for reading; but that adjustment period isn't going to be that smooth, unfortunately. :(

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/12/10 03:59 am

Title: Chapter 5

AAAAWW no Lydia!! How did such a wonderful night end so badly that you left in tears!!

I hoe Shiro goes after her..she is so prideful and stubpborn but she was just nervous and a little scaried..this is minor so hopefully they can ge past it quickly!

Shiro is so incredibly sexy! his looks, he words, his actions...Lawd all of him...when he said you are my heart I wanted to give him some..lol. Oh yes he loves him some Lydia and she loves him. We just got to get them past this akward stage...

Loving this story sweetie....I love how you write Bana ..I really feel like I know these folks and I really care about them also...I can hardly wait to seee what happens next....btw Lydia does need more female friends...they would have told her it was alright to let your guy pay for dinner...lol



Author's Response:

Lydia did let him pay! It was the tip she was going to leave to be all egalitarian. But you right, someone would'v told her a man will pay for everything in the beginning. She thought she was doing good, too. *pats her*

Thank you so much for reading. I really appreciate it!

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/12/10 02:04 am

Title: Chapter 5

I adore this couple and enjoy watching them get it right and wrong. This feels like a story about the couple next door, or your cousin and her husband. I'm really, really enjoying this. Plus, the Inoue brothers are fine, so that doesn't hurt either, lol. I will be bugging you soon for an update.

Author's Response:

Thank you for the 24 hour reprieve for the update. :p  Glad you enjoyed this installment too!

And yeah, they still fine...

Reviewer: BoSoxQT Signed [Report This]
Date: 15/12/10 01:09 am

Title: Prologue

Great way to keep us panting for more!  Wonderful writing, looking forward to the next installment.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading!

Reviewer: Love to Read Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 15/12/10 12:18 am

Title: Chapter 5

Oh, nooooo - and the date started so well..*sigh* I hope they talk and straighten things out...great chapter, update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! The course to love can be a bit jagged in certain spots, though. :(

Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 14/12/10 11:02 pm

Title: Prologue

Hi,

    I'm really loving this story.  They seem to go well together and well Shiro is just too hot for words. What is the RJC verse and who is Henry?



Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading!  And send me a message so I can give you the information about RJC, etc!

Reviewer: plutofigaro Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/12/10 08:49 am

Title: Chapter 4

SOOOOO! Good! I am loving how they were friends and how you get to see his feelings. There are no games and it is so honest, which I love! Wonderful job you are amazing!

Author's Response: Thank you very much for reading and I'm glad you're enjoying it!

Reviewer: Fatal Mars Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/12/10 09:46 pm

Title: Chapter 4

Loved the update and I so adore Shiro's character, that he knows what he want and ready to get. Please update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you very much for reading and I'm glad you're enjoying it!

Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/12/10 09:33 pm

Title: Chapter 4

Awww, you're ending it there...! More please =) I simply can't get enough of Shiro, lol!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  Lydia's answer will be up much quicker than the last update, I promise!

And Shiro, he's a nice hero to write, I can tell ya!

Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/12/10 03:00 pm

Title: Chapter 4

I'm really liking me some Shiro. I think they make a cute couple.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/12/10 06:05 am

Title: Chapter 4

This guy is pretty smooth. I am loving Shiro. Lydia is a firecracker.

Author's Response: Shiro definitely has some moves and Lydia likes them :p.  Thank you for reading!

Reviewer: Genevieve Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/12/10 03:09 am

Title: Chapter 4

<i>“So…” she began, taking another deep breath and licking her lips.  “Tell me this direction you want us to go in.”

His eyes captured hers and wouldn’t let go.  “Exclusivity.</i>

 

I don't have a problem with that.



Author's Response:

LOL, neither does Shiro, I'll have you know. ;)

 

Thank you so much for reading!

Reviewer: Leo Princess Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/12/10 02:19 am

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