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Title: Part III - Naughty Bill (Alternate Chapter)

This was a good AU and i enjoyed it greatly.  I wish it was more.

Kim

Reviewer: kimyso Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/12/11 06:27 pm

Title: Part III - Noble Bill (Alternate Ending)

I thought that this was a very good story.  Of Course i wished that it was longer, I do so love to here about Bill.  I am glad that you did change the chapter with Bill and Tara "hookup". That would have been distastful to me because it would have help solidify the thoughts that most have when it comes to Bill and that is that he is shoot now and think about and apologize kinda guy.  I think that the character is so much deeper than that.  Again, I really enjoyed the story.  Oh---It is Tara Mae.  LOL. 

 Happy writings,

Until next time, Sammie



Author's Response:

Hi Sammie.  Just wanted to let your know I've posted the first chapter of my newest True Blood fanfic, Save Me.  It is a Jason/Tara pairing that takes place between Season 3 episode 9 and 10 and will explore their relationship over the years through a series of flashbacks. If you get chance, please read and review.  I would love to get your feedback.

Reviewer: Sammie Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/03/11 07:27 pm

Title: Part III - Naughty Bill (Alternate Chapter)

I loved it. Both endings were great! You are so talented and the story was very believable. 

Author's Response:

Hi Fatal Mars.  Just wanted to let your know I've posted the first chapter of my newest True Blood fanfic, Save Me.  It is a Jason/Tara pairing that takes place between Season 3 episode 9 and 10 and will explore their relationship over the years through a series of flashbacks. If you get chance, please read and review.  I would love to get your feedback.

Reviewer: Fatal Mars Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/12/10 08:07 pm

Title: Part III - Naughty Bill (Alternate Chapter)

Thanks for the great read.  It was nice that you gave the reader the option of good vs. bad Bill, we got to choose (or read both to form an opinion).  I go for the good Bill, although the sex scene seemed pretty hot, I guess I could see them together if the circumstances were right.  It's wonderful that Tara had a happy ending no matter what way Bill went.  It even seems like they could develop a friendship in the future.  Well done.

Author's Response:

Hi Elizabeth. Thanks so much for your review.  Just wanted to let your know I've posted the first chapter of my newest True Blood fanfic, Save Me.  It is a Jason/Tara pairing that takes place between Season 3 episode 9 and 10 and will explore their relationship over the years through a series of flashbacks. If you get chance, please read and review.  I would love to get your feedback.

Reviewer: Elizabeth Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/12/10 07:38 pm

Title: Part I

Actually, I enjoyed both versions and I have to admit that Bill is not my favorite person on the show but you made me like Bill, scratch that, you made me love Bill.  This was a different pairing and you pulled it off nicely. 

Author's Response:

Hi Vie.  If you get chance, please read and review my newest TB fanfic, Save Me. It is a Jason/Tara pairing that takes place between Season 3 episode 9 and 10 and will explore their relationship over the years through a series of flashbacks. If you get chance, please read and review.  I would love to get your feedback.

Reviewer: Vie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/12/10 06:44 pm

Title: Part I

I enjoyed both versions. As far as I'm concerned Tara isn't getting enough attention from all those sexy men on the show!

Reviewer: jjazz59 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/12/10 06:39 pm

Title: Part III - Naughty Bill (Alternate Chapter)

First, I would like to say you're a fantastic writer...very detailed imagery you employ in your writing...

I really only planned to read the first alternate ending of this tale...but curiosity got the better of me...and I read both...if I wasn't a fan of True Blood...I would say that the second ending was all kinds of hot...it was if I was truthful...yet I couldn't help but be skeeved out as I read...because Season 3 has really made me dislike the Bill character immensely...and not because of Sookie (I swear that character is like fingernails on a chalkboard for me now)...but because of what Bill did to Tara in Russell's mansion when she pleaded for his help but he refused her and left her to her own devices as Franklin mentally and physically abused, tortured, and RAPED her...that I can never forgive...probably the same reason I'll never see Eric in a 'romantic' light after what he, Pam, and Chow did to Lafayette when they chained him up like an animal in the dungeon at Fangtasia for selling V and fed from him...HYPOCRITES...in my mind, what Bill did Tara is the same or maybe even worse than Franklin did...at least Franklin was certifiably insane and fancied himself 'in love' with her...and Franklin was such an entertaining loon...at least for me...not so much for Tara...I absolutely hate the victimization of Tara...enough already, geesh...

But interesting take on the Bill/Tara dynamic...I'll grant you that much...I just never want to read about Bill's skeevy paws/fangs on her again...



Author's Response:

Hi Attheritz.  Just wanted to let your know I've posted the first chapter of my newest True Blood fanfic, Save Me.  It is a Jason/Tara pairing that takes place between Season 3 episode 9 and 10 and will explore their relationship over the years through a series of flashbacks. If you get chance, please read and review.  I would love to get your feedback.

Reviewer: attheritz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/12/10 05:55 pm

Title: Part III - Naughty Bill (Alternate Chapter)

This was insanely wickedly sinfully GOOD! The glamouring bit was well planned out. Sookie wouldn't know what really went down between Tara and Bill even if she probed Tara's mind. Bill the naughty Santa. Collecting Tara's milk and cookies before he wipes her memory and leave her a gift before he pulls out of her chimney.

Dang! You're good!  Thank you!! I enjoyed both versions but need I say which one I preferred more?



Author's Response: LOL!  I love your Santa metaphor!  Bill definitely enjoyed eating those cookies.

Reviewer: FatJan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/12/10 09:16 am

Title: Part III - Noble Bill (Alternate Ending)

Brilliant work!

I loved both versions. Both expertly done!! Will there be more?

Reviewer: FatJan Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/12/10 09:05 am

Title: Part I

Please tell me that Bill isn't going to take advantage of Tara.  I hope he decides to spend the night getting to know her.  I'm a Bill fan so I don't want him to do this because it will be deja vu.  If he has sex with Tara under the current circumstance (her being glamoured) then a lot of people are going to be angry if it comes out.  Sookie will be hurt.  Jason and Lafayette will try to kill him (Jason will see it as his duty as Tara's protector).  Sam will flip out and put an end to Bill for good.  Bill knows that Tam have recently been intimate so that means hands off!  He even realizes that Tara must be important to Sam for him to reveal his secret.  Lets not forget that Tara will be mighty pissed, and will feel violated all over.  Thanks for the chapter.  Please update soon.

Reviewer: Elizabeth Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 30/11/10 03:16 am

Title: Part II

Read it. Loved It. Want some more of it.

Update soon :)

Reviewer: NubianOki Signed [Report This]
Date: 27/11/10 07:24 pm

Title: Part II

Oh hell no!!! Tara and Bill???!!! WTH???? I don't think Sookie or Sam would be tooo happy about this.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/11/10 04:16 am

Title: Part I

Although I am a die-hard TAMshipper, I must say I enjoyed this pairing and often thought what it would be like to see these two rolling in the hay.

Now that Tara has a less negative perspective on Bill, I wonder if this means that she is more perceptive of supes in general and will this mean that she will accept Sam as a shifter. Great story! This is more than a treat!! Happy Thanksgiving!

Reviewer: FatJan Signed [Report This]
Date: 26/11/10 07:07 pm

Title: Part II

Niiiiccce update...so they're getting closer - can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 25/11/10 11:08 pm

Title: Part II

I usually don't read the fanfic type stuff. But you have me wanting to see where this goes.

Reviewer: IzzyLove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/11/10 07:14 am

Title: Part II

Wow me likey alot whoo damn now it about to go down cant wait for the next update!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/11/10 06:14 am

Title: Part II

Wow!!!  YOu stopped right before the hot, butt naked sewx!!!!

Author's Response: LOL.  Sorry.  You'll just have to wait until Part 3 for the butt naked sewx.

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 25/11/10 05:02 am

Title: Part I

Bill's ass got chewed out and it was good.  I looking forward to seeing where you are taking this story.

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 24/11/10 05:41 am

Title: Part I

This is a good start.  Bill mentioning that Tara is important to him as well (probably because of Sookie).  I can't wait to see how you find a way to put these two together.  I think it will be hard to win over Tara because of the abuse she suffered at Franklin's hands and Bill didn't do anything to help her.  However, it would be nice if he got a chance to explain himself to both Sookie and Tara.  I just hope that if he and Tara become closer they tell Sookie about it and not keep it from her (and that Bill isn't just using Tara, although I doubt he would).  Right now Bill on the TV show is getting a raw deal, so hopefully he will be redeemed in your story. Please update soon.

Reviewer: Elizabeth Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 24/11/10 02:18 am

Title: Part I

Love the start. Even if she doesn't take him back, I hope they give him a chance to at least explain.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/11/10 01:01 am

Title: Part I

You know, this is what I want to hear from Bill next season, with regards to Tara. Because I'm not feeling him these days. The dialogue was really on point here. Tara would not have taken a dime from him and she is always fiercely protective of Sookie. I cannot imagine how Bill and Tara will come together but I cannot wait to read more and find out.

Reviewer: PriscillaPal Signed [Report This]
Date: 23/11/10 09:24 pm

Title: Part I

Well,...this will be an interesting pairing. Tru Blood is somewhat addicting.  And I am always up for something new and different.  So, bring it on! LOL! I am interested to see the next chapters.

Nyeesha

Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/11/10 07:26 pm

Title: Part I

wow i am liking this so far i never liked sookie character and hell i love me some tara so this story definite got my intrest whoo tara and bill hmmm this is going to be fantastic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/11/10 07:08 pm

Title: Part I

Nice start and interesting pairing - update soon!

Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 23/11/10 07:01 pm

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