Oh, my! I need a drink.
Reviewer: kiMoni99 Signed
[Report This]Date: 26/07/11 02:33 am
Finally, they're back together. Please let there be another wedding in the making and a happy ending for Kelly and Va, Serana & Jamar, Brandy & Maks. I hope Sy’rai gets a stepfather who loves her like a dad. Maks will loves Sy’rai like a daughter.
Reviewer: Diva25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/06/11 06:43 am
Hot damn...now that was HAWT!!! Fiyah I tell ya, LOL...I hope they can weather the storm of this separation...because I need more of this...happy writing!!!
Reviewer: attheritz Signed [Report This]Date: 29/05/11 06:11 pm
Hoping for an update! I was watching Maksim's bachelor show on youtube (Someone was nice enough to translate for us). He is so different than he is on DWTS! I was shocked to see how shy he was! As I watched it, I thought of Brandy!
Reviewer: NikkiHearsAWho Signed [Report This]Date: 28/05/11 08:09 am
MORE!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Danni Anonymous [Report This]Date: 25/05/11 02:49 pm
I appreciate all the freakiness. It's good to have you back.
Reviewer: Montoya Anonymous [Report This]Date: 20/05/11 04:22 am
Yes,having Bran get pregnant from this night, then having Maks leave for the loner show would make for some interesting situations that would probably be fun to write! Keep up the great work!
This was HAWT! I'm gonna need a shower now! HA!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Addison Anonymous [Report This]Date: 19/05/11 09:08 pm
The sex is great but a new angle would really build the tension and anticipation. A concentration on the emotional connection now that Maks is preparing to leave. They've had an awful lot of sex, even though Bran is on the pill, consequences can arise. Imagine how she would feel caught up in an unplanned situation and her man is off screwing around with a house full of desparate women throwing it at him. Stress, doubt, and devastation makes for hot and steamy on his return.
Author's Response:
I hear what you are saying, however I believe that the two of them have had enough of an emotional spiral. Sometimes I believe that we have to take some things just the way they are without always becoming so emtionally bankrupt. And Brandy has spiraled enough!
Thank you so much for your review, it really means alot to me.
Reviewer: NessaB Anonymous [Report This]Date: 19/05/11 04:05 pm
Wow, that was hawt!! More please.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 19/05/11 06:47 am
i think brandy and marks just made a baby keep it coming the chapter was hot damn damn
Reviewer: jadadominique Anonymous [Report This]Date: 19/05/11 05:47 am
OMG that was HOT... I think that I need a SHOWER
Reviewer: lady liberty Anonymous [Report This]Date: 19/05/11 05:43 am
Damn! I'm greedy! I want more! I love this story so much. Thank you so much for your creative gift, and for keeping this story alive!
Reviewer: NikkiHearsAWho Signed [Report This]Date: 19/05/11 12:51 am
Well you certainly made up for your absent by writing a really hot, sexy chapter! I'm hoping I don't have to wait too long for the next chapter.
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed
[Report This]Date: 18/05/11 04:42 pm
OMG that was HAWT! Thanks for the update!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 18/05/11 10:00 am
Damnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn whoo absolutly loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed [Report This]Date: 18/05/11 06:52 am