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Title: Chapter 35 Down on Bended Knee

I thoroughly enjoyed your story.  You are a very good and imaginative writer.  Please write some more.  You captured exactly the way I felt about Maks and Brandy.  Boy, they sure had us going.  I really think they would make a dynamic duo.

 Reviewer: Maria Baker Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/02/13 07:29 pm
Title: Chapter 35 Down on Bended Knee

I want biracial kids too lol 

I'm sooo loving this story. I will be sad when it ends. 

 Reviewer: LadiiCharr Signed [Report This]
Date: 27/07/12 10:17 pm
Title: Chapter 35 Down on Bended Knee

Please tell me you haven't abandonded this fic.

 Reviewer: Christina V Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/02/12 06:13 pm
Title: Chapter 35 Down on Bended Knee

Love it! 

 Reviewer: honeybear Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/11/11 09:16 pm
Title: Chapter 35 Down on Bended Knee

i keep loving this fic! update as soon as life allows you to.

 Reviewer: christina Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/11/11 02:44 am
Title: Chapter 35 Down on Bended Knee

loved it so well worth the wait please end the story with the birth of the baby

 Reviewer: jadadominique Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 14/11/11 11:03 pm
Title: Chapter 35 Down on Bended Knee

Oh my! you really did a great job with the last chapter and this one. The sexin' was super hot and it was so cute the way Maxim ask Sy'rai for Brandy's hand in marriage. I so glad Max's family is thrilled for him. Brandy's familys on board too. Well done!

 Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/11/11 06:52 pm
Title: Chapter 35 Down on Bended Knee

That was really cute and too damn short! It's too early to have me crying at work embarrassing myself.

 Reviewer: danni Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 14/11/11 03:47 pm
Title: Chapter 35 Down on Bended Knee

Oh how I want this to be real.  I love this story, so please continue to keep our dream alive and keep writing.  I know things in life come frist, so I'm waiting.

 Reviewer: skriver Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/11/11 12:10 pm
Title: Chapter 35 Down on Bended Knee

Awe so cute!! Just the way I would've imagined the proposal!! :D Don't wait too long to update again!!

 Reviewer: Megan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 14/11/11 08:13 am
Title: Chapter 35 Down on Bended Knee

LOVED IT. I HAVE BEEN ON PINS AND NEEDLES WAITING FOR THIS NEXT CHAPTER AND IT WAS WELL WORTH THE WAIT. BUT PLEASE DON'T ME ME WAIT THIS LONG FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER. PRETTY PLEASE

 Reviewer: Rajuan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 14/11/11 08:03 am
Title: Chapter 35 Down on Bended Knee

Ahhhhh! That was so sweet I was in tears as well when he asked her and she had tears and he had tears and we all had tears.  :D

Thank you for the update.

More please....

Happy writing.

 Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/11/11 07:48 am
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