Okay, I know I'm late to the party, but I have been reading along as each chapter has gone up...and I love it...I loved Team BranDMC and was devastated for them when they were so unfairly eliminated off of DWTS...this willl be the last year I watch that mess...it's become too political for me...and has forever tarnished the "entertainment" value of the show...but I digress, off my soapbox...

Love this story...I love your imagery...feels like I'm almost there with them as they experience this tale...but even though I absolutely heart the hot, hot lovemaking...I'm ready for the romancing and the courtship to begin...they love each other...so give us more of why they feel this way about each other...yes, we know they are incredibly attractive...but what makes each of them IT for each other...that's what I want more of...this isn't meant as a criticism of your writing...just a way to hopefully help you flesh out your story...because believe me...I couldn't have come up with a better story...you are a fantastic writer...just need the characters to be more fleshed out...I know it's difficult when dealing with real people...but I have faith in you...

I hope Brandy doesn't let her fears consume her and really just let go...let flow and allows Maksim a chance to be truly a part of her life....can't wait until Maks meets Seraii....

Great story...keep it coming...

I loved chapters 6 and 7. Cant wait for the rest.......

damn this story is fantastic whho as soon as my bandwidth usage goes down on my internet service i will be back to leave my response to all the chapters !!!!!!!

DAMN!!!!!!!!!!!!! =)