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Title: 9. Shattered Hopes

glad she came clean about hearing the conversation.  Not good to let things festor.

Reviewer: elaine Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 24/01/11 11:14 pm

Title: 9. Shattered Hopes

Oh oh, hope she talks to him instead of making assumptions from an over heard conversation and running for the hills. I'm really liking this couple and hope they can make it work but it seems Brandy is intent on leaving him. She definitely has trust issues.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/12/10 07:14 am

Title: 9. Shattered Hopes

He should have told her, about being with erin !shm

Hope its not over between them

Can't wait to read more =) 



Author's Response: Only time will tell. Thanks for R&R.

Reviewer: mekaky Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/12/10 05:44 pm

Title: 9. Shattered Hopes

No, I don't think it over over for them...but this new bit of information that Brandy has discovered has certainly made things much more complicated for them...I really don't like the fact that Maks wasn't wholely honest with her about his relationship with Erin...even if it was only a fling for him...she did ask...and he wasn't completely truthful about what went down between him and Erin...I'm thinking that he probably didn't want to make her any more skiddish than she already is about trying a relationship with him...possibly confirming in her mind at least his 'playboy' image...now, Maks's little 'lie' of omission might have possibly cost him his one true chance of a life with her...

And I'm really not understanding Brandy's rationale for continuing her trip in New York with Maks if she really doesn't want to have anything more to do with Maks after it is over...I'm assuming that she still plans to go on sexing him and getting her freak on...all the while as she plotting to get him completely out of her life...that's kinda cruel...why not just confront him with what she knows...and letting him explain his side...and for her sake...I hope she's using and making him use protection...because if not...well....time will tell...

You've amped up the volume in this tale...oh, what a tangled web you're weaving...can't wait to read more...thanks for the unexpected update...short, but oh so good...



Author's Response: I love how you think. Only time will tell. Thanks for R&R.

Reviewer: attheritz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/12/10 05:29 pm

Title: 9. Shattered Hopes

No, it's not over.  She asked if they were together like...together together and he said no...they only had sex once.  People hook up all the time for sex doesn't mean they are in it like that. Erin just got attached.  He obviously decided not to pursue anything further with her and Erin knows it.  Should he have told Brandy that he and Erin had sex?  If I was Max, I'm not sure if I would have or not because of her possible reaction.  I will say that I can see how Brandy feels...she's probably wondering if he's really honest with her or not...his feelings or if she just another fling.

Author's Response: I love how you think. Only time will tell.

Reviewer: R. Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05/12/10 04:34 pm

Title: 9. Shattered Hopes

Brandy did ask Maks about his relationship with Erin and he should have told her that he hit that.  Now this is Brand's excuse not to give Maks a chance.  Brandy you are stupid!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/12/10 07:48 am

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