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Title: Chapter 11: You See Right Through Me

I personally hope she is pregnant but that again is my hope and I love when main characters of love interest have babies. :D that is just me though.

Can't wait to read the next chapter

Thank you for shariing

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/04/11 02:36 am

Title: Chapter 11: You See Right Through Me

so sad....

Reviewer: elaine Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 24/01/11 11:29 pm

Title: Chapter 11: You See Right Through Me

I think they made the right decision for now...this relationship is moving much too fast and there are still too many issues that will cause problems for them...they both need to take a step back and reflect and decide just what it is they want from this relationship...though I have a feeling they are on different pages right now...Maks wants permanence and Brandy...well, she doesn't quite know what she wants...this was almost a mature conversation between them...I'm impressed...

I hope the separation helps them find clarity and they can have a do-over...get to really know each other without physical...looking forward to more...thanks again for the update...

Reviewer: attheritz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/12/10 11:46 pm

Title: Chapter 11: You See Right Through Me

Wow, Maks doesn't play. I agree with Brandy slow down so the  girl can think. Plus not using protection was stupid. Their relationship is much too new. I think time away will do them both some good. Maks is being too negative right now. He shouldn't give up. Love this story and keep the chapters coming. I'm anxious to read more!

Reviewer: jjazz59 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/12/10 05:31 pm

Title: Chapter 11: You See Right Through Me

I think this was the right decision.  They have a lot to work on but somehow they are just still scratching the surface. Brandy needs to work on herself...most celebrities have therapists and I'm not suggesting she needs to see one but she needs some self-reflection.  Why is she so insecure?  Why doesn't she believe she deserves love?  She needs to get the core of her issues and then overcomeSelf-help can be a good thing...even if she chooses not to get professional help.

Reviewer: R. Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/12/10 05:07 pm

Title: Chapter 11: You See Right Through Me

I'm disappointed she decided to leave and I'm with Maks ....it seems like its over. Hmmm, are they really meant to be??? Maks seem to be the more serious of the two. Maybe Brandy was just scratching an itch and decided to run when things got tough. She can take all the time in the world but she needs to figure out what she wants. She's too high strung!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/12/10 08:26 am

Title: Chapter 11: You See Right Through Me

That was amazing, I love how Maks and Brandy deal with each other.  Maks, I lvoe you if Brandy don't want you I do!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/12/10 07:31 am

Title: Chapter 11: You See Right Through Me

Awww.... Well I understand. Distance makes the heart grow finer. Definetly for Maks (yumm, lol) I can't wait for more, have a great night and PLEASE post soon :)

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/12/10 06:59 am

Title: Chapter 11: You See Right Through Me

Wow i loved the update i hope the seperation wont be too long!!!!!!!!

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Date: 08/12/10 06:54 am

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