Ahhhh! Brandy got Maks so tied up and twisted he don't if he is going or coming and here I thought shewas trying to grow the hessy up.
I hope she is pregnant still and I want her to stop punking my boy Maks.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed
[Report This]Date: 05/04/11 03:39 am
great chapter.
Reviewer: elaine Anonymous [Report This]Date: 24/01/11 11:38 pm
Maks is crying?! I can't believe it...he seems like such a tough guy.
Author's Response:
Those are the ones whom are more sensitive. I have one, he has a rough outer apperance; but will drop a tear in a minute. I love that about him. He is more affectionate than I am. Thanks for R&R.
Reviewer: R. Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 14/12/10 03:50 am
I don't feel for Brandy, I personally have never thoguht that she was attractive. Her eyes are too far apart or something. But Brandy does work with what God gave her with that being said how long does she expect Maks to wait for her? She derserves whatever explosion that Maks is going to have. I am loving this story.
Author's Response: I never want to attack a person's outer apperance, beacuse Beauty is in the eye of the beholder. This story is fanfiction and Though I don't always agree with the pics for most of the stories written on the chamber, i would never personally say that, however I am so glad you are enjoying this story. I believe that once a person falls deeply in love with someone they are willing to wait, perhaps even a life time. Therefore, with this story being a work of my mind I know that Maks is not looking at the superficial things about Brandy, but he wants her heart, mind, body and soul. A prime example of love being about the inner is Beyonce and Jay Z, Alicia Keys and Swizz Beats. Would I personally choose either of those men, no, but it works for those two young ladies. Be blessed and continue to R&R. I look forward to hearing from you always, Nakia.
Date: 13/12/10 05:02 am
Wow, Maks is hot under the collar! Hope he cools down before speaking to her. Maybe he needs to distance himself from her for a while and get himself together. Is she really with the stress???!!!
Author's Response: I believe she is to him, sometimes there is one person who will make you forget all the rules and go outside your comfort zone. Like i expressed to another reader, looks are not always the key to a man or woman falling in love with someone, sometimes its just chemistry. Thank you so much for reading my story, it brings me great joy when you guys R&R. Please continue to give me your feedback.
[Report This]Date: 13/12/10 03:48 am
damn this was a excellent teaser whoo i want more, more moreeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
Author's Response: I aim to please. the next chapter will have some surprises!! Please continue to R&R. Thanks, Nakia.
Author's Response: I aim to please. the next chapter will have some surprises!! Please continue to R&R. Thanks, Nakia.
[Report This]Date: 13/12/10 03:26 am