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Title: Chapter 14: Can't Be Just Friends.

i forgot the plan.  Brandy's reaction was so gut wrenching it brought tears to my eyes.  Awesome job.

Reviewer: elaine Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 24/01/11 11:49 pm

Title: Chapter 14: Can't Be Just Friends.

I absolutely LOVED this latest update...good for Maks...and yet poor Brandy...but homegirl needed a dose of reality to hit her square in the face to finally wake her up...and boy did she ever get it...I know Maks was kinda harsh with the breakup over the phone...but really, how much longer was she expecting him to keep waiting indefinitely while she decides what she wanted...she knows Maks is in love with her...he had told her and shown her in numerous ways how much he does...yet, she's still dragging her feet and out doing interviews as if he means nothing to her...now she's in a hell of her own making...misery is a poor substitute for true love...and that's what she had with Maks...but she let her overly cautious heart overrule her courage and now she's all alone...can't believe she thought they could remain friends after she's been trifling with that man's heart like that...I know she has hangups...but if she doesn't figure out a way to get over them or work through them...then she'll never be happy...my advice...woman up...and be willing to come with guns blazing to fight for your man...

Can I say how much I love Kelly in this story...she is a true friend...and Ray J came as a big surprise...but he loves his big sis...and he wants to see her happy even if she can't see it herself...loved the 'shock treatment' plan...I say it has a good chance of working...

Looking forward to more!!!



Author's Response: Thank you so much for being a faithful reader and reviewer. Poor Brandy, but like you said homegirl needed a swift kick, in order to see what's right in front of her. You can't but to love Kelly, we all need a friend like her. I love Ray J and I think he gets so much flack, I just wanted to soften him up a bit. Again thank you for your support. Nakia.

Reviewer: attheritz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/12/10 02:52 pm

Title: Chapter 14: Can't Be Just Friends.

I think there plan is going to work. I am so excited to see whats going to happen in Jamaica!

Reviewer: Kareia Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/12/10 07:57 pm

Title: Chapter 14: Can't Be Just Friends.

I must admit that I didn't like the plan at first....and I thought that RayJ convinced Kelly not to do it...to just somehow cook up another plan to get them together.  After reading towards the end of the chaper, I realized that it just might work but poor Brandy. Crying her little eyes out. I liked reading Brandy/Syrai's interactions too.   And FINALLY...we got to the root of her issues/her ambivalence towards giving her all with this relationship.  Good work on that part.  I am a little disappointed that this will be over within the next 3 chapters. I still feel as if the story just really started.

Reviewer: R. Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 16/12/10 07:18 am

Title: Chapter 14: Can't Be Just Friends.

Loved it! Something needed to shake Brandy up.....She was dangly too much with Maks' feelings. He didn't go too far as he had to make the pretend breakup realistic.  She needed a reality check as his feelings were involved. No one is guaranteed a happily ever after but when love comes, for the most part it may be worth the risk as there's only one life to live. And it has nothing to do with looks, its all about what's going on with the heart.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/12/10 07:13 am

Title: Chapter 14: Can't Be Just Friends.

Please, I don't want to see them break up. How about Ray J & Kelly set up plan to get Brandy & Maks back together. But in a romantic way or either way.

Reviewer: Diva25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/12/10 06:36 am

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