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Title: Chapter 15

She is wrong because the pap can take something innocent and stretch it all out lf propotion

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/04/11 05:19 am

Title: Chapter 15

Poor Maks!  lol

Reviewer: elaine Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 24/01/11 11:54 pm

Title: Chapter 15

I hope there plan works, in a romantic way.

Reviewer: Diva25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22/12/10 06:40 am

Title: Chapter 15

Hi first i want to say that i like your story and that your supporting cast are funny as hell i love ray j and kelly they crack a sistha up lol. and Maskim is okay but he needs work like a bit cause sometimes he pisses me off, but he couldnt be a man otherwise.  Then theres Brandy i'm sorry but she pisses me off like i understand she has been hurt before and that she more cautious now the second time around, but she reminds me so much like a child......a teenage girl that doesnt know what she wants she lets others dicates her life and what not shes like a girl in a woman's body. i understand that shes been through alot but im tired of hearing about everyother paragraph.....she needs to grow up like NOW!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading, and i promise you

will see a transformation in our girl Brandy!! Yeah, that Kelly and Ray J are too funny. Please continue to R&R, your feedback is important to me! Merry christmas to you and yours. Love Nakia.

Reviewer: shyann Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 21/12/10 07:01 pm

Title: Chapter 15

Oh, Nakia...you know you and your family are in my prayers...Godspeed to health for your grandmother...and your son's friend...though tragic...is not unheard of...I'm an educator and we were inserviced on suicide at the beginning of the school year...and sad to say...they are getting younger and younger...I'll pray for his soul and his family also...but the mind is such a delicate thing and sometimes...it just can't see past today to see a brighter future for tomorrow...

To the story...yep, Maks has his work cut out...Brandy is pissed and rightfully so...though she should always question what she reads and sees in those mags...she's a celebrity herself afterall...and should know that sensation sells papers...but she's so emotional right now that her brain is trying to grasp anything it can to make some sense of why Maks broke her heart so callously...and this is the easiest answer for her...but make no mistake...she loves that man with everything in her...why else would she fly into a jealous rage after seeing those pictures of him and Joan...I love how both Kelly and Ray J flew to her defense if Maks was truly trifling with their girl's heart...but Maksim loves him some Brandy and I have faith in him to make it right for her...looking forward to what happens in Jamaica...update soon, please!!!



Author's Response:

thank you so much for your prayers, they mean so much to me. My grandmother is doing well, surgery went well. Thank you for praying for my son and his friend's soul. Please keep his family lifted in prayer, they are not coping very well, which can be expected. Thank you so much.

Now to the story: Yes our Maks truly does love him some Brandy, and she loves him. Jamaica is going to cause a transformation for our sweet dear Brandy. Kelly and Ray J are true to Brandy, they love her and know her so well. Thank you again for your prayers and for R&R this story. Wishing you and yours are very Merry Christmas! Love Nakia. 

Reviewer: attheritz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/12/10 05:56 pm

Title: Chapter 15

Very nice chapter. The next chapter is going to be fun with everything that is going on. I hope your grandmother surgery goes well. How awful an eleven yr old commiting suicide is really scary. That child's poor family is really suffering. God Bless them.

Author's Response: Thank you, and the surgery went well. As for the family of the 11 year boy; well just keep praying for them. Thank you so much for reading and enjoying my story, please continue because your feedback is important to me. Merry Christmas to you and your family. Love Nakia.

Reviewer: jjazz59 Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 21/12/10 05:31 pm

Title: Chapter 15

I just wanted to stop in and let you know how much I'm enjoying reading your BRANDMC fic.  I swear it's a hottie tottie.  And I'm drooling waiting for the reunion sex!  Thanks for your creative flavor.  It's a jewel darlin!

Author's Response: Aww, i'm truly speechless. However, thank you this means so much coming from you, since i have truly enjoyed your stories. It is an honor when other writers take the time to R&R. Thank you so much. Much respect to you. Have a Merry Christmas. Love Nakia.

Reviewer: SparkApCider Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/12/10 07:58 am

Title: Chapter 15

Glad Maks is up for the challenge as Brandy is so stubborn. But she really has some nerve after she's been giving him the run around and flirting with strangers as she admitted on the George show. She really needs to own up to her crap too. If she wants Maks she needs to be serious in order for them to move forward.

Sorry to hear about your GM but hope she recovers ok. Wow, suicide at 11yrs??? I can't even imagine that. That's  frightening and really sad! How can a family recover from something like that??



Author's Response:

I truly enjoy your feedback, always so insightful. Yeah our girl Brandy is a trip, however you will see a transformation within during this escapade in Jamaica. Yeah Mon! 

Thank you for your concern for my grandmother, the surgery went well. Please just continue to pray for the family of the 11 year old. They are not handling (which is expected) this to well. 

Please continue to R&R. Merry Christmas to you. Love Nakia.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/12/10 07:29 am

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