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Title: Chapter 17: Say AHH

oops already read this one

Reviewer: elaine Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 25/01/11 12:59 am

Title: Chapter 17: Say AHH

this could be interesting....

Reviewer: elaine Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 25/01/11 12:14 am

Title: Chapter 17: Say AHH

I'm so glad they had make up sex. I see marriage in the final chapter.

Reviewer: Diva25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29/12/10 06:18 am

Title: Chapter 17: Say AHH

Very nice chapter. About time Maks and Brandy got it on! The sexin was hot, hot, hot! So what if Val is younger. Don't rule him out, Kelly! Jamar sounds fine as hell. What's a girl to do? Can't wait to find out!

Reviewer: jjazz59 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/12/10 11:28 pm

Title: Chapter 17: Say AHH

Nakia, I thiink this update was on point with who and what Maks is-the man has a dom personality, always seem to be in control. excellent capturing this. The music selection was perfect

Author's Response: I believe that he has dom personality, and usually men like him are attrated to women like Brandy. Thank you for enjoying this chapter. I'm glad you liked the playlist.

Reviewer: JJ0425 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/12/10 08:17 am

Title: Chapter 17: Say AHH

Loved that Brandy and Maks are back on track. Can't wait until Val sees Kelly.

Author's Response: Yes Ms. Kelly is about to find love, but where she least expect it. Thank you for R&R.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/12/10 06:36 am

Title: Chapter 17: Say AHH

Damn, Nakia...that was blazing hawt!!!!  Maks is kinky and he's writing his name all over that...and the best part is they are both seeing a future...together...sexing with love is the hottest thing ever...love these two together...can't wait for more sexy times...

Now, to Ms. Kelly...hmmm, she's met a piece of sexy hot chocolate...and already dismissing Val because of his age...but I wonder if girlfriend will find out that age ain't nothing but a number...can't wait to see where you go with this mini-triangle...loved the update....looking forward to more...



Author's Response:

I know I love those two together!! Yes our boy Maks is kinky, and he claimed his woman. Brandy finally realized that if she wants love she has to be an active participant.

Yes, Yes, Ms. Kelly has met a man, and she has underestimated the power of the Chmervoskiy charm.  Thank you for R&R.

Reviewer: attheritz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/12/10 06:13 am

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