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Title: Chapter 21 New Revelations

Damn I love this story when are you going to put more up?

Author's Response: Ty, for r&r I will update this evening.

Reviewer: Danielle Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/01/11 02:21 pm

Title: Chapter 21 New Revelations

I hope they all find happiness.  Serena with Jamar.  Kelly and Val, and of course Brandy and Maks

Author's Response: I do too. Ty's for r&R.

Reviewer: sam Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 25/01/11 04:08 am

Title: Chapter 21 New Revelations

i love drama when its not my life

Author's Response: Me too, that's why I love to write about it. Ty's for r&r.

Reviewer: elaine Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 25/01/11 12:57 am

Title: Chapter 21 New Revelations

I am loving your story. I am loving the naughty Val:) I don't know what is up with Serena, but I cannot wait to find out! Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Thank you, and it's only matter of time before we do find out. Keep r&r, I appreciate you!

Reviewer: Megan Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/01/11 10:39 pm

Title: Chapter 21 New Revelations

I can barely wait until the fireworks.  What's Serena's angle?  Is trying to pull a tooth without Novacaine?  Oh lawdy the firestorm is about to commence.

Author's Response: Serena is up to something, but whether it's good or bad only time will tell. Thanks for r&R.

Reviewer: SparkApCider Signed [Report This]
Date: 24/01/11 04:58 am

Title: Chapter 21 New Revelations

LOVE IT!!!! I can't wait for more :)

Author's Response: Thank you, i aim to please.

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/01/11 08:27 pm

Title: Chapter 21 New Revelations

Loved the update but I see a showdown in reference to Jamar coming up!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/01/11 09:10 am

Title: Chapter 21 New Revelations

I enjoyed reading this chapter...the ladies' talk...Brandy and Maks' conversation.  <---Love that the most.  Yes, there was tension...I don't think Serena and Kelly will fallout but I think whatever happens at the dinner/club will make her fall right into Val's arms.  I am still liking naughty Val.

Reviewer: R. Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/01/11 07:39 am

Title: Chapter 21 New Revelations

i think they will clash over jamal but i want kelly and val to get it on really bad i think he"s better than than his brother and bolder please let him claim her as his pretty please

Reviewer: jadadominique Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 23/01/11 05:41 am

Title: Chapter 21 New Revelations

Could Serena still be having some lingering feelings for Jamar...is that why she had that far away look...something is definitely up in that arena...and I really think she should have told Kelly about her past relationship with Jamar...I certainly would have if Kelly was my girl...something is about to pop off at tonight event that's for sure...

Val is incorrigible...but I loved seeing Kelly squirm...she's hiding from her real feelings for Val...trying so valiantly to convince herself that he's not getting under her skin...but she knows that's not the truth...she's been shook...and it's Val that is doing the shaking...

I love the grown up relationship that Brandy and Maks are having now...the honesty is refreshing...they are such as hot, sexy couple...and the beauty of it all...it's all tinged with so much love and mutual respect for each other...love it!!!

Can't wait for the next update!!!

Reviewer: attheritz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/01/11 03:52 am

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