Kelly and Val seem very interesting to me. Maybe Kelly will deny deny deny with Val and continue the cat and mouse game. I think it would actually be better this way for now, and more interesting ;)
Does Serena actually have feelings for this Jamar dude? I want to know what she has to say for herself in the next chapter.
I can't wait for the chapter when Brandy and Maks get back to the states....the Erin confrontation will make for some interesting writing and a great read!
Can't wait for more!!
Reviewer: Sadie Anonymous [Report This]Date: 09/02/11 08:00 am
I love Kelly and Val! I've read the chapter twice (well at least the Kelly and Val parts). I think they should see where this will go beyond the bedroom.
Reviewer: R. Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 07/02/11 04:48 am
Sizzle! Val and Kelly's lovemaking was so much reminiscent of they communicate with each other--primal!
Serena needs to be honest and let the chips fall, because ultimately that will heal her. I feel bad for her, but she didn't have to do Kelly like that. Her friend didn't deserve that ambush. Only thing that could have been worse was if she had informed all that she knew Jamar while leaving Kelly as the sole uniformed.
Thanks for the chapter. I'm loving how you've told three love stories in this one. Those ChemBoyz are hawt!
[Report This]Date: 02/02/11 10:05 am
I realize that I've already written a review, but I had to say thank you again. This is the sixth time that I've read this chapter. I love how you include the most important people in Maks and Brandy's lives in this story. I would never had thought to put Val and Kelly together but I'm loving it. I can't wait to see what comes next.
Author's Response: Sam, thank you so much you have truly lifted me and inspired me to hurry and update this story. I just feel a connection to all things Maks and Brandy. Thank you again, for your feedback.
Date: 01/02/11 05:18 pm
I love this story. you have seriously got me hooked to the point that i amd checking everyday for a new chapter. I can't wait for the next part to be put up so we can see what is going to go down between all the couples invovled.
Reviewer: Danielle Anonymous [Report This]Date: 01/02/11 02:53 pm
Hmmm, looks like Serena and Jamar still have a thing for each other. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 01/02/11 07:52 am
I loved reading every single word. I find myself checking daily for another chapter. Thank you so very much.
I hope Kelly and Val allow this relationship to blossom. Hopefully, one day soon there will be a double wedding.
Obviously Serena isn't over Jamar....I don't think he's over her as well. Probably a communication problem that caused the separation. Someone jumping the gun.
Reviewer: sam Anonymous [Report This]Date: 01/02/11 06:37 am
Hey there Nakia, I have been reading this story since the beginning, and I don't know why I haven't left a review, but this is a not only a WELL WRITTEN story but its HAWT as well... every character has chemesty with eachother.
Brandy and Maks were HOT on DWTS, the only other partner I loved Makes with was Laila Ali....(IMO I think he has a crush on her)
I think that Kelly will try to run from her feelings for Val, but knowing Val, he won't let her.... they are going to be FUN to watch...oh and thier love scene... I need some ICE WATER.
Serena needs to be HONEST with Jamar, she should have done that in the first place.. and she needs to apologize to both Brandy and Kelly especially.
Looking forward to more.
Author's Response:
Thank you Lady Liberty for reading my story, and thank you so much for reviewing and loving my story. It's because of you and all the others that inspire me to continue to write this labor of love.
As for the story; only time will tell what Ms. Kelly will do, will she run or will she stay? I enjoyed writing their love scene!!!!
And we shall most certainly see what Serena will do. Thanks again for r&r.
Reviewer: lady liberty Anonymous [Report This]Date: 01/02/11 03:36 am
Damnnnn that was wow whoo loving val/kelly!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading & reviewing my story. It means alot too me.
[Report This]Date: 01/02/11 03:34 am